PostsCommentsgraveyardpat in #hive-161465 • 10 days agoI like that strange sense of paranoia that lingers throughout this poem. It's powerful, but not too overbearing- it's juuust right!graveyardpat in #hive-161465 • 10 days agoFascinating... Obviously, war is not an uncommon theme, but I scarcely see poems get as personal and specific as this one. Very nice!graveyardpat in #hive-161465 • 16 days agoFascinating... I quite like how the imagery can oscillate between being rather tender, and being raw as hell.graveyardpat in #hive-161465 • 16 days agoReally good! The message of less is more really resonates with me, it's all quite elegantly put. And I like how the last line subtly inverts the usual saying.
