Hive Open Mic. Week 1|71. Separation. /// Separación. ORIGINAL.
Hola, openmicistas. Esta semana, la número 171 nos acerca cada vez más a la edición número 200 que debe ser algo sumamente importante y de seguro la celebración será por todo lo alto.
Esta vez la temática correspondió a @merit.ahama quien se enfocó en la palabra divorcio o separación, y me puso a pensar en tantas uniones rotas, incluyendo de más de 30 años de vida matrimonial.
Mi canción consta de una polirritmia conformada por tonada, pasaje y joropo, todos son ritmos venezolanos y a medida que aparecen la canción adquiere mayor rapidez.
He aprovechado para transmitir un mensaje a las parejas con el fin de que eviten a toda costa una separación que resulta dolorosa y traumática la mayoría de las veces.
SEPARACIÓN.
Es un paso triste y duro
el de la separación
porque en un camino duro
rueda envuelta la visión.
Si quedan hijos ptequeños
hay un impacto mayor
porque se destrozan sueños
que apenas tienen color.
Mantengamos la vigencia
con el esfuerzo mayor
para hacer que en la existencia
haya siempre mucho amor.
Para que nadie se asombre
hago la recordación
de que no separe el hombre
lo que Dios formó en unión.
Para finalizar, doy las gracias a #OCD por el apoyo brindado durante tanto tiempo, y es algo que aprecio de todo corazón.
Hive Open Mic. Week 1|71. Separation. /// Separación. ORIGINAL.
Hello, openmicistas. This week, number 171, we are getting closer and closer to the 200th edition which must be something extremely important and for sure the celebration will be in style.
This time the theme was by @merit.ahama who focused on the word divorce or separation, and it got me thinking about so many broken unions, including those of more than 30 years of married life.
My song consists of a polyrhythm made up of tonada, pasaje and joropo, all are Venezuelan rhythms and as they appear the song acquires greater speed.
I have taken the opportunity to convey a message to couples to avoid at all costs a separation that is painful and traumatic most of the time.
Hello, openmicistas. This week, number 171, we are getting closer and closer to the 200th edition which must be something extremely important and for sure the celebration will be in style.
This time the theme was by @merit.ahama who focused on the word divorce or separation, and it got me thinking about so many broken unions, including those of more than 30 years of married life.
My song consists of a polyrhythm made up of tonada, pasaje and joropo, all are Venezuelan rhythms and as they appear the song acquires greater speed.
I have taken the opportunity to convey a message to couples to avoid at all costs a separation that is painful and traumatic most of the time.
SEPARATION.
It is a sad and hard step
that of separation
because in a hard way
the vision is involved.
If there are small children left
there is a greater impact
because dreams are shattered
that barely have color.
Let's maintain the validity
with the greatest effort
to make that in existence
there is always much love.
So that no one may be astonished
I remind you
that man may not separate
what God formed in union.
In closing, I thank #OCD for the support provided for so long, and it is something I appreciate with all my heart.
