🎵 Hive Open Mic 201 - WILLIAM – original song written & performed by @shemZee & Yavor

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Dear friends,
My mate Yavor /solo guitar /and I /vocals & rhythm guitar/ recorded an original song of mine called WILLIAM
In this song, I sing about feeling really lonely and wanting a connection that's special and deep. I use words like "awake" to show how I wish to be close to someone, not just physically but in a meaningful way.

I describe holding the sun and shadows fading in the rain to express a romantic idea of a strong and unbreakable bond. When I mention "William" for the rain, it's just a playful and personal touch to make it more interesting.

Characters like Jacqueline La Rock and a powerless man represent the idea of a love that seems hard to reach. The word "Alone" repeated at the end shows a strong feeling of being by oneself.
I also talk about time feeling different when you're with someone and when you're alone. The broken window, sad candle, and cold world describe a sense of loss or sadness.

I wrote this song to explore love and loneliness, using simple pictures and ideas to share a message about our feelings and experiences. I hope it makes you think and feel something too.

English translation of the lyrics:

Will you stay awake with me?
others tomorrow we'll be,
It's madness to believe in dreams

I won`t sleep with you, by my side,
holding the sun, in our own stride.
Beneath the rain, our shadows coincide.

And this rain, perhaps it's called William,
falling carelessly, in another life.
And this man, he's utterly frail,
Jacqueline La Roque before your eyes

Time with you speeds by,
Time without you ties,
the snare of tomorrow's bind,
around me, it winds.
And how cold the world seems,
a shore bereft of its streams,
a broken window, a candle mourns,
alone,
The sea is the final abode,
the return, a sad ode,
even the bell in my mind stays quiet, forlorn.

And this rain, perhaps it's called William,
falling carelessly, in another life.
And this man, he's utterly frail,
Jacqueline La Roque before your eyes
Will you stay awake with me?
others tomorrow we'll be,
It's madness to believe in dreams
And how cold the world seems,
a shore bereft of its streams,
a broken window, a candle mourns,
alone,
alone,
alone
ESPANOL
Queridos amigos,

Mi compañero Yavor (solo guitarra) y yo (voz y guitarra rítmica) grabamos una canción original mía llamada "WILLIAM". En esta canción, canto sobre sentirme realmente solo y querer una conexión que sea especial y profunda. Utilizo palabras como "despierto" para mostrar cómo deseo estar cerca de alguien, no solo físicamente sino de una manera significativa.

Describo sostener el sol y las sombras desvaneciéndose en la lluvia para expresar una idea romántica de un vínculo fuerte e inquebrantable. Cuando menciono "William" para la lluvia, es solo un toque juguetón y personal para hacerlo más interesante.

Personajes como Jacqueline La Rock y un hombre impotente representan la idea de un amor que parece difícil de alcanzar. La palabra "Solo" repetida al final muestra un fuerte sentimiento de estar solo. También hablo sobre cómo el tiempo se siente diferente cuando estás con alguien y cuando estás solo. La ventana rota, la vela triste y el mundo frío describen una sensación de pérdida o tristeza.

Escribí esta canción para explorar el amor y la soledad, utilizando imágenes e ideas simples para compartir un mensaje sobre nuestros sentimientos y experiencias. Espero que también te haga pensar y sentir algo.

Traducción al español de la letra:

¿Te quedarás despierto conmigo?
otros mañana seremos,
Es una locura creer en los sueños.

No dormiré contigo, a mi lado,
sosteniendo el sol, a nuestro propio paso.
Bajo la lluvia, nuestras sombras coinciden.

Y esta lluvia, tal vez se llame William,
cayendo descuidadamente, en otra vida.
Y este hombre, es totalmente frágil,
Jacqueline La Roque ante tus ojos.

El tiempo contigo pasa rápido,
El tiempo sin ti ata,
la trampa del mañana,
a mi alrededor, se enreda.
Y qué frío parece el mundo,
una costa desprovista de sus corrientes,
una ventana rota, una vela llora,
solo,
El mar es el último hogar,
el regreso, una triste oda,
incluso la campana en mi mente permanece en silencio, melancólica.

Y esta lluvia, tal vez se llame William,
cayendo descuidadamente, en otra vida.
Y este hombre, es totalmente frágil,
Jacqueline La Roque ante tus ojos.
¿Te quedarás despierto conmigo?
otros mañana seremos,
Es una locura creer en los sueños.
Y qué frío parece el mundo,
una costa desprovista de sus corrientes,
una ventana rota, una vela llora,
solo,
solo,
solo.

The original Bulgarian lyrics:

Искаш ли да сме будни?
Други с теб ще сме утре
Лудост е да вярваме в съня

Аз искам да не спя с теб
и слънцето държа в плен
Сенките ни гаснат под дъжда

И този дъжд май се казва Уилям
Безпаметно вали във друг живот
И този мъж е съвсем безсилен
пред твоите очи Жаклин Ла Рок

Времето със теб бърза
Времето без теб връзва
примката на утрешния ден
около мен
И как студен светът е
бряг останал без море
прозорец счупен
тъжна свещ без храм
сам
Морето е последен дом
завръщането - тъжен стон
дори камбаната в главата ми мълчи

И този дъжд май се казва Уилям
Безпаметно вали във друг живот
И този мъж е съвсем безсилен
пред твоите очи Жаклин Ла Рок

Искаш ли да сме будни?
Други с теб ще сме утре
Лудост е да вярваме в съня

И как студен светът е
бряг останал без море
прозорец счупен
тъжна свещ без храм
сам
сам

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I really love the duet of this instrument, it is very pleasant to the ear and i feel moved watching it over again

Thank you for listening & for your kind words

You are welcome

Bravo! It really is a wonderful song and this new format with Yavor is very appealing to those of us who have been following your music in the community. The lyrics of the song are very intense and I love how you describe it and connect it to this week's theme. Nice man!...


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Thank you very much, there will be more in this format

I love this duet ,it is really amazing ,and I also enjoyed you guys presentation