Hello, I leave my opinion.

Creativity and technique used for the desired purpose = Perfect.

Framing, the line of flight and the circular movement of the model following the effect = Perfect.

Colors? If there were more colors it would help a lot. Given that it's just one, orange-yellow from the flash with external light ruins it (in my opinion).

So, I edited in black and white. It would eliminate the "defect" of light and it would become more attractive, more subjective. It would take longer to understand the image, which would make it more enigmatic.

I took the liberty of doing a simulation that I attach. To imagine yourself you have to experience it.