I'm glad you wrote it as a work of fiction, it was a great read XD
though I wonder what happened to the grandfathers and what the narrator would have done if she'd had a boy instead of a girl
I'm glad you wrote it as a work of fiction, it was a great read XD
though I wonder what happened to the grandfathers and what the narrator would have done if she'd had a boy instead of a girl
Maybe you can write that story?? The prompt was about woman going to Mars so ... maybe the boy would have written about grandmothers too. I kinda felt the grandfathers were a bit irrelevant in my story. Or that part needed a bigger chapter. I didn't feel need to focus on men to be honest. They get all the focus in most stories anyway. Mine was meant to be a story about strong woman..
I was more curious in terms of the story lore, I get that from a mechanical point of view to keep the story focused and concise :)
Unfortunately must decline, I'm so irrationally non-competitive I even run from art and writing challenges XD
plus I'm struggling with my normal stuff x_x