in #hive-1525242 years ago

Loved the pacing, setting and the characters. Of course I loved the name of the cafeteria the most. So clever of you to write a “pun” play—I’m giggling like a school girl. Very sophisticated rendering of an ordinary setting with all the details that bring the readers’ attention to the table. Bruno is sheer genius and the coincidence of shared interests’ that brings the couple together is chocolate-sweet. Gorgeous!

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Aw! Thank you, my dear! Good luck with the judging. Oh my gosh, there are some wonderful entries. I do not envy you for what you're up against!

I’m sitting here with coffee in hand rereading. It’s going to be very, very tough. I’d like to make everyone a winner. How do you do this every week? Geez!