A Picture Is Worth A Thousand Words - The Changeling

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This post was inspired by an image-based writing prompt in the Freewriters community, A Picture Is Worth A Thousand Words

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"You'll be so proud of her, Ma ! They've picked her to play on the Feast of St Flora. She's the finest fiddler in all the land, and the fairest, too."

Pat Connor had a beaming great smile. But his mother's face dropped and she crossed herself.

"You shouldn't talk like that, Patrick. Mary may be fair, and a fine fiddler, but you mustn't say she's the finest and fairest. Pride comes with consequences, and you never know who may be listening."

He laughed. "Now don't be so superstitious, Ma. You talk to me of fairies and elves, of boggarts and witches, but that's just pagan twitterings."

With that, he went on his way; he had work to do, and the Feast was only a fortnight away.

All fortnight Mary practiced, and everyone in the town commented on how well she played, and how they were looking forward to hearing her at the Feast. The Connors made no secret of the pride they felt in their young daughter.

Finally, the day of the Feast rolled around. But Mary's customary easy smile was replaced with a frown and a surly expression. Her parents put it down to nerves.

The hall was full, everyone in town had come to the Feast; the last one of the winter, celebrating the cook's art of making the best of what remained of the previous year's harvest. There must have been three hundred people there. The stew smelled amazing, and they all took their places on the dance floor ready to dance to Mary's playing before sitting down to eat.

Mary sat on the chair, in her finest pale blue dress, her red hair drawn up in ribbons, and began to play.

It was a traditional jig, to get people's bones moving after the cold of winter. She played merrily, and the folk danced in a whirl with great smiles on their faces.

But as she played, the music changed. Subtly, oh so subtly. It sped up, the fiddle had an edge to it's tone, a sharpness. The sharpness turned to menace as the music accelerated.

The people found themselves dancing faster and faster, and none could stop. Faster and faster they spun and whirled and pirouetted. The smiles of pleasure changed to looks of confusion and then panic. They wanted to stop dancing, but were held in a spell, unable to stop.

The first to drop were the oldest folks, the grandparents and great-grandparents. They'd survived a harsh winter, but their hearts could not survive this.

More and more people stopped dancing and dropped dead as the music sped up faster and faster. Mary kept playing, in an impossible frenzy on her fiddle, her face blank and impassive, focused entirely on her work.

Finally she stopped. The hall was strewn with the lifeless corpses of the townsfolk. Only her father was left standing, breathless among the carnage, tears in his eyes.

A new figure entered the hall. Four feet tall at best, robed and crowned and regal. He needed no introduction. He was the King of the Elves.

"Patrick Connor, your overweening pride did this. We have your daughter, she will be well cared for after our own manner. You have her changeling. Care for her, or your life will be forfeit. Now, I see there is a feast prepared. Good. My elves are hungry after this long winter."

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Aww
It means a lot for her to play at Feast of St Flora and even got a lot of people dancing
She’s so talented then

Wow. I guess the appearance of the King of the Elves reveals its no pagan twitterings after all! Those poor dead people. And poor Mary too! From a fine fiddler to an instrument of death. A fine and thought-provoking story. Well done!
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Thank you ! The problem with coming up with a story like this is that it leads to two more; what happens to the real Mary being raise din the Kingdom of the Elves, and the struggles of poor Pat raising changeling-Mary in the human world.....

I know! It's fascinating how a short piece like this can entice a writer to explore the characters deeply. It would be interesting to read more about Mary in both worlds as it would enrich this story. 🙂

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Woah! What a twist!
In deed

Pride comes with consequences

It's believed that good and melodious music attracts the spirits, for a dance. Reading this makes me believe it's really true 👍

Wonderful story - with a twist. Not sure I want to dance anymore after reading this 😁

Thank you ! Sooner or later I'll write the sequels, but I have to let them marinade in my twisted little mind for a while first to see what devious quirks my subconscious can add to them 😀

I hope I get to read it! I'm in a few writing communities since I'd like to do a bit more writing again, too. Hopefully, I'll see it 😊

You should write ! It's a great way to get the brain working, and certainly something I find quite fun and therapeutic 😀

Wow, she must be really talented to get everyone dancing like that. It's amazing how music can bring people together, even if it took a surprising turn. Another great work by the god of prompts bro you're the best

You captured my heart with this story. I could hear the fiddling, the story reminded me partly of the one of the red dancing shoes but this one ended so much better. I just hope the girl will be happy. Why did Father not die?

Thank you ! Ah, for the father to die, that would have been a problem. He had to live to see the terrible consequences of his excess pride. But he also had to live so that someone would look after the changeling the elves left in place of Mary. The changeling and Mary are connected, but that'll be another story (mostly because my brain hasn't cooked up the details yet....)

🤣🤣🤣 I let your brain cook a bit how will dear dead end? Is his face shown by the next pic1000 prompt?

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