The Nerd Who Wished to Belong.

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Since getting into college, Dan has always felt the pressure to belong. All his peers were "cool dudes" and he felt like the nerd amongst them. Forfeiting virtue, Dan finally gave in to the infamous "Aye" cult which cost him his dear life.

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Hello everyone! The short fiction above is my entry to week 48 of the ZapFic Monday “240-characters-or-less” story contest on the prompt “belong”. For more details or if you wish to participate, you can click here.

THANKS FOR READING! ❤️

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Incredible! How you summarized what seems to look like a long story into few words.
I feel sorry for Dan, there's nothing really wrong with being a nerd that doesn't belong.
You're an incredible writer, ride on.

Of course there's nothing wrong with it. "Nerd" was what people thought of him, he really shouldn't have minded their opinions.

Thank you, I appreciate your kind words! ☺️

Damn... This was rough. You did a good job with the Title. I clicked immediately I SAW IT!

Hmph.... This short Story basically sums up cultism, fraternities, and sororities all in 50words!

Haha, I'm glad you liked it.
Oh yes, it pretty much does.
Thank you for stopping by! 😊

Nice write up. No to cultism! From your write-up I can see you are from Nigeria. Nice to meet you dimmablog 🤗

Yes I am.
Nice to meet you too, Tomi 😊.

Oh no!!! It's so sad that Dan couldn't see the bigger picture and that cost him is life.

Nice writeup sister ❤️☺️.

It's sad indeed. This might just be fiction but it's the reality of many college students, especially in Nigeria.

And like you mentioned, it's important that we always look at the "bigger picture" regardless of our insecurities.

Thanks darling 😊❤️.

You're right dear, it's what is applicable to us today, we see these things every now and then, we just keep praying for God's guidance.

You're welcome dear, I'm glad I did 😊.