THE FINAL BOSS #Zapfic50 "enjoy"

esbat in #hive-161155 • 9 months ago

A short story to be written in 50 words not one word less, not one word more!, for the Freewriters community to #zapfic50monday contest. Prompt: "enjoy"

THE FINAL BOSS

Dark alleys were gang territory, a lesson the thugs always insisted on teaching him the hard way. Until they found themselves on the ground with broken bones and bloodied faces. Our hero enjoys these fights. They are nothing more than a warm-up before facing the real villain, the final boss.

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9 months ago in #hive-161155 by esbat

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justclickindiva 9 months ago

The hero learned the game, endured, then gained the upper hand. His past experiences and run-ins were nothing more than mere practice to hone his skills. He should be ready to face his nemesis.

Thanks for sharing this intense story. I could visualize the hero as he worked his way to the top. Nicely done. Take care.

!ALIVE

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esbat 9 months ago

Thanks for your words, you too were encouraged to continue the story and it was great, I love this challenge, it gives me the opportunity to try things out and try to create scenes, capture a little moment that grabs the reader's attention without the pressure of the blank page or feeling overwhelmed by the number of words.😅

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justclickindiva 9 months ago

You're truly welcome. It was a pleasure to read your flash fiction story. I enjoyed it as I could envision the scene with all participants. That's when you know you have done a lovely job for your readers.

Take care.
!ALIVE

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