The Last Pick (Zapfic50: Prompt - Pick)

in #hive-1611553 years ago

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The children gathered.

Captains calling names.

I pick Susan.

I pick Harry.

I pick Jackson.

One by one the small crowd of children dissipated; names were selected.

Mary's name was always the last called.

She stepped back into the shadows.

Her last written words; a sad epitaph:

I pick death.

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Very powerful! Well done, I know these zapfic posts are often harder than a short story. Awesome!

That does means a lot coming from you my friend. You are an excellent writer and someone whose writing I look up to here on Hive. I put a lot of thought into these few words. I'm pleased it had the desired effect, and it felt good coming back today. Onward and upward... feeling blessed 🙏

We are here to support each other, let's get busy making Hive even better than it already is - and it's already awesome 🙌

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Oh my... Brilliant write-up!
Short, succinct, wonderfully written story even in a few phrases.

why thank you so much Farmgirl. I truly appreciate that coming from you. Feeling blessed. I will do better next time...I plan to get back to the Inkwell this week. thanks for the kind words and encouragement!

You are very welcome. It's a powerful story in very few words. And it would be awesome if you get back to InkWell, they have weekly writing prompts that are amazing and you sure can participate :)

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Wow ! So much in so few words.

Great job !

Thank you so much for visiting my humble zapfic my sweet friend. I am happy that you appreciated it. I will deliver more this week, longer content and strive to improve the quality too. Have a wonderful week.

Yay! 🤗
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