Waiting for someone till the death.~ A picture is worth a Thousand words.

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I saw whatever in the picture. And tried to make a story

In the kaleidoscope of a bustling city, a girl was sited in a quaint café on one of the window corners, her eyes wide open and infinitely wandering around the door. She used her agitated hair to distract, looking out the street window at all the people living their everyday lives. On the other hand, coffee remained in the air, everything but churned her gut with anxiety. She had been early, as there had been too much expectations from her end, but as the time went, each second was becoming more painful. She glanced at her phone every couple of minutes, pressing the "button to see whether there was a message or a call, but there was not anything. She was waiting without any longing or hope. At any moment, a man would come in and inform her that she may proceed with the procedure. The seed of doubt kept inviting her, and her heart was fading out softly with each ticking second gone by. Was the person running late.Did something happen? Salty liquid seemed to be wondering into her eyes as she was battling to hold them back. The place has rooms full of people and somewhere by the window, the sky started getting dark with the evenings and it began hitting her that they aren't coming. Having built her hopes on a relationship that now seemed completely disinterested, she ended up going home with heartache and anger. However, even they had missed their chance, this young woman remained hopeful and steady towards a better future. She wiped away her tears, grappling with the next unknown but maliciously stood strong and stoodt. And when she stepped out of the dim night sky into the cool air of a different day, she knew that she could always count on brighter days ahead even though that particular one had to end in disappointment.

Thi picture is Ai generated by wake-up kitty for the prompt

#freewritehouse #pic1000 #contest #pictureprompt #creative-writing #innerblocks .

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I like this extended take ... a whole life proceeding through this room instead of just this one scene ... well done!

Thank you my friend ☺️

You're welcome!

You have painted a picture of a woman who wouldn't let past disappointments deter her, but had the hope that there would be other appointments.

Thank you for sharing this story with the community 👍

She's disappointed I can see, but there's another chance. Let her take her time, something better would definitely come along.

Yes of course

At least she took the time to think and decided she give life a chance. It's a plus she has a dog, good for walks and talks.

Yeah the time travels fast too when you are with perfect person. If you or not with the perfect person then one second will be equal to 100 days

If you enjoy yourself it goes fast too, if not the right one better without.

Yeah but If any enjoy itself it feels like a robotic one. In this world every person has a companion.

There should would be brighter days ahead.

Right