No Pinocchios Here...

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photo taken by @wakeupkitty host of this contest on behalf of @freewritehouse.


No Pinocchios Here...

In a world, where honesty is hard to find,
Where truth is harsh, and a lie is kind..
We would build a home, just you and I,
And in our little world, there'd be no lie...

In the journey of love, where secrets reside,
I will come with you, we'll walk side by side..
Truth in our mouths, and trust at heart,
We will stay the course, we will keep the path...

I know love can be complex, with highs and lows,
Moreso in a world, where deception overflows..
But in this world, that you and I would share,
There'd be no lies, and no Pinocchios here...

#SladenSpeaks
#IfWordsWereNudes


The image reminds me of the No Smoking sign, only this time it has a depiction of a human rather than a Cigarette. I initially thought of the title, "Life is prohibited here", but then thought better of it after looking closer and seeing the long nose.

So we have instead, No Pinocchios Here...

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A beautiful poem indeed depicting the character traits of Pinocchio as deception and lying. Of course no relationship could thrive on these

Thank you @edith4angels-eu

Relationships are built on trust, and lies are the quickest way to ruin those foundations.

A world without Pinocchios. I wonder what that world would look like.

Thanks for joining pic1000 👍

Lowkey, i do too... We all chase perfection, but will we ever catch her?

Thank you.

Tu poema es un himno a la sinceridad. Tiene una hermosa musicalidad, buena rima y lindo mensaje. Me gustó mucho. Éxito.

Your poem is a hymn to sincerity. It has beautiful musicality, good rhyme and a nice message. I loved it. Success.

Thank you friend.