Palm - ZapFic Friday's Fifty Words Story Challenge

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Joanna was being pursued by unknown assailants. There was no time to think, she ran for her life. The sounds of her feet crunching over fallen palms was a dead giveaway.

Luckily it wasn't always the case and the sand soon greeted her weary feet.

Paradise? I don't think so.



For those interested in participating you can write your own 50 word story. Please do. The rules are simple to follow and I look forward to reading your take on the writing prompt.

You may peruse the following link for all the details

https://ecency.com/hive-161155/@freewritehouse/the-weekend-must-be-here-its-zapfic50friday-write-me-a-story-in-precisely-50-words

Rules:

Please post to the Freewriters Community.

Please post a link to your entry in the comments section of this post

Please use #freewritehouse and #zapfic tags.

YOU MUST use a word/character counter (if you search for word counter on the internet or in your phone's app store you will get a big choice!) wordcounter.net and include a screenshot. Entries without a screenshot will NOT be valid

Please use the prompt provided as you see fit (use your imagination, you don't need to use the words of the prompt in your story if you don't want to)

Try to tell a complete story if you can!

The story MUST be precisely 50 words long

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She ran to an unknown pleasant place.
Was it paradise?
Nice short story dear.

Did she escape?. Was the paradise a safe heaven?.
Short story but It got me wanting more. Nice job.

Mission accomplished. Thanks for the visit.

Does that mean that worse things can come for her? This could be material for a long story hehe

This is only the beginning for her. She just ran past me in a panic lol