DUMPED IN A VALLEY - #ZapFicMonday "

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This post is an entry to the ZapFicMonday - week 50. Prompt is
"Valley"!

The #ZapFicMonday is a literary initiative from the Freewriters Community in which writers have to create a story, using the prompt provided, with 240 characters (letters, full stops, spaces, etc) NOT words!

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He said I was the best thing that ever happened to him. That he would be sinking in the valley of depression, had I not appeared in his life at the time I did but it's barely a month afterward and here I lay dumped in a much deeper valley.

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    Not all that glitters is gold. A sad story, but I enjoy it soo much.

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        Thank you so much @piyamito

        Not all that glitters is gold.

        Indeed. Some relationships seem to be what we have waited for all our lives and in a matter of time, they dissipate into thin air, leaving us in utter shock and disbelief.

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            Hmm! That is the way life plays, we can help others out of their problems but we can't help ourselves. That's why we need each other to survive. I pray he gets someone to help him out of that valley before it consumes him. Beautiful story.. but you almost got me emotional 🥰🥰

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                Beautiful story.. but you almost got me emotional

                And now you are the one almost getting me emotional. I must have put a lot of emotion in that scene for so many to think it was my experience.

                I'm pleased at your response at the same time.

                Thank you and please pardon my late reply.

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                    And now you are the one almost getting me emotional. I must have put a lot of emotion in that scene for so many to think it was my experience.

                    Wow!! That was really strategic, it caught me🥰.

                    Thank you and please pardon my late reply.

                    Noo don't worry about the late reply. You are always welcome.

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                         2 years ago 

                        Love is a two side coin. You never know which side stares at you as you flip the coin. Such a sad one I hope you get over it.

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                            Do we ever really comprehend what love is?

                            Such a sad one I hope you get over it.

                            Thank you but it was only a passionate fiction

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                                And I'm sorry for my late response

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                                    Hmmmm so sad, only God can save ladies from sugar coated mouth guys. I pray you get over it

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                                        Hmmmm so sad, only God can save ladies from sugar coated mouth guys.
                                        Yeah. It's hard to know what's real these days. Thank you for writing back.

                                        I pray you get over it

                                        It was fiction though.

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