Dreem-Wotw S1 R1 | Sanctuary, where are you?

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Greetings fellow poets 🙌

Hi everyone 🤗. I'm back again to this lovely community of expressive hivers to share with you my entry for the Dreem-Word of the Week contest ❤️.

This will be my first time joining WOTW, thanks to my dear friend @samsmith1971. You can see more details about the contest in her post here 🤗.

My entry will be in form of a poem and it was my first time writing one in English from the start. I'm not even sure if I understand it completely, but this was what came through.

As I've been learning, letting words and expressions flow is sometimes the best and most accurate way to put yourself out there. So, I really hope you'll enjoy it 😁.

Sanctuary, where are you?

Lost hope
Lost all faith.
Trapped in this rope
In a shape of an eight.

What is that place
Of inner peace?
A sort of a maze
Where I can find my release.

My beloved Sanctuary
Oh, where are you?
I just want to return
And surpass this through.

They keep trying to get into
My sacred home,
But I just can't let them view
What I'm really made from.

I just need this moment
Of pure silence,
To fight against my opponent
For much needed guidance.

Final notes 💭

I wrote these verses a few days ago, after a big silly argument with my partner. I went for a walk in the local park to calm down and the words just started to get around my head. So, I wrote what I felt at the time, the need for a sanctuary, a place of silence where I can put my thoughts and emotions in order.

I always needed that alone time to function and I've been trying to respect it more. Having space, silence and time to process is my sanctuary. My special place where I can just be, overthink and come to conclusions. It's what I need to recharge and build up my strength.

In a way, my sanctuary is within my own mind and the amazing this is I just figured this out now, as I'm writing this to you! How amazing is that??

Well, I now need some time to process this conclusion and therefore, I'll take my leave. Thank you so much for reading and for your time 🙌.

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Nice to know you took a walk to a place where you can clear your head and the poem came handy. I pray that after a cool off, things will return back to normal.

Hehehe they did work out fine yes 😅 just a silly argument that turned out to be big... now that I think of it we where both hungry at the time, and we all know hungry people tend to argue 🤣🤣

This is a very beautiful poem. We all need that sanctuary where we feel safe and secure.

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Thank you 😊 I'm glad you enjoyed it!

Writing a poem is one of the most difficult task for me. It's too his difficult but I love to read it and I really enjoyed while reading.

Thank you so much @intishar 😊 I used to think that as well, I always struggled to understand poems 🙈🙈 but it turns out the words tend to flow when I let them hehhee

Welcome back! Hope we all find our inner peace.

Thank you 🙏🙏 I appreciate you stopping by!

This is simply amazing. And I am glad you found this sanctuary in you.

I hope that you guard your sanctuary well and not allow your opponent to get in no matter what happens.

Thank you so much @iskafan 🙏🙏 I'll make sure to treat my sanctuary properly hehehe 🤗

Very nice writing, sometimes we need to take refuge and many times without wanting it we find ourselves, I am very happy to read that you have found your sanctuary, you should go more often to the park xD, thanks for sharing.

You are right Jose, I need to go there more often... sometimes lazyness gets the best of me heheh

Peace and quite can be a wonderful sanctuary Daisy!

🙏🙏🙏 Amén to that!

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This is a beautiful poem, @blackdaisyft, and if you hadn't told me it was your first one written in English, I would never have known. I love the imagery at the beginning with the number 8, infinity and new beginnings, but also for you a feeling of being trapped in a loop of lost hope.

Ohhh, you caught that meaning 😁😁😁 very perspective of you 🥰🥰 thank you so much for stopping by 🤗

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I hope the argument wasn't serious, and all is well :) That it made you realize something about yourself could actually turn it into a positive experience :)

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It all worked out in the end hehehe 😊

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My pleasure, I'm glad everything is good 🙌

We've all got a sanctuary where we connect , find inner peace and reflect.
You've got a nice poem here.
Well done

Thank you for your kind words @ijhonsen 🤗🤗 that inner peace is the most important to me 🙏

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Seeking sanctuary means a lot of things to everyone, we have different definitions for the word Sanctuary.

The mind is indeed a very powerful place where a lot is going on every second, we need to be at peace with it always. I am glad you can seek comfort in yourself, that is pretty impressive.
I hope you guys were able to sort things out afterwards.

It's true! Sanctuary can be so many different things 😊 It's really interesting to see other people's definitions of sanctuary! This contest is already amazingly surprising!

Thank you so much for stoping by and for your kind comment 😊

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Thank you! 😊

We all want a place of quietness which can also be called our sanctuary. Where we feel safe and everywhere is silent to help us release those worries. I love your poem.
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Thank you so much for your kind words 🙏🙏 have a lovely weekend 🙌