For all the right reasons

in #hive-1614653 months ago

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You touched my soul like a pill

diffusing into my bloodstream

the feeling engulfed me

I felt it take away my burden

as if it is being carried into the Pacific

now i feel terrific

Terrifying and satisfying

to have found the one

you healed my aching soul

you are the one that sings to my heart

I need you in my life for the purest reasons

to love and adore you

let me love until time tells the world

with me it is patience, grace and caring

with me you are loved right

let me make you a promise

I will love you as my darkest secrets

to protect you until my lights go out

what do you say?

let me love you

for all the right reasons

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Actually, in these words, I see more than love, I see a valuable reminder to stay true to ourselves and ensure that our motivations are aligned with our core values without getting caught in the external pressure.
But please correct me if I misunderstood your feelings and what you truly wanted to express.

you've done a good job with this interpretation. it took a sight different angle but it conveys the message perfectly.

Your words are deeply moving and beautifully express the healing and transformative power of love. Keep up the good work!

thank you

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