The Dead of Night

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Lay me down gently,
For I have been sleepless a long time;
I had lain on my bed, half asleep and half awake -
Yet, a peaceful night of slumber has evaded me for a while;
And now all I want to do is close my eyes.

Been restless for years;
There is peace and comfort in my bed -
But that comes at a price too high;
My tossing and turning keep me up for hours on end,
And then all I want is to drift off to sleep -
Still, I lie awake in the dark.

It can't be helped;
Everyone wakes in the morning and rests at night,
Here I am reluctant to see the light of day,
The night feels livelier and comforting;
Wish I could feel the same in the mornings -
But it never happens.

While the world goes to sleep, I'm wide awake;
The dead of night is when I feel alive,
Morning lights don't bring any comfort to me -
I struggled time and time again -
Only to be more miserable than before;
Yet the nights are my sanctuary.

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For many, the night becomes the perfect accomplice of creative outbursts, endless stories and letters formed in the depths of darkness.

Thanks for sharing.
Good day.

thank you so much for your support... I know there are some others who feels the same way about day and night and it's still an endless battle for many who are fighting to find the same comfort, energy and peace during daytime but hasn't found yet... they're still trying

I don't know if you are singing to insomnia, but I liked how you address that state where sleep is a battlefield that often leads to states of distress. Thanks for sharing. Regards.

even I don't know much about insomnia, but I know what sleep-deprivation feels like - and more than that, the night feels comforting and soothing, so much so that I prefer just my own company and enjoy the time.
Thank you so much for the support

So unfortunate that the day seem dreading and there's no longer comfort in your bed. The fear of something lurking could be troubling and all we seek for is peace. A nice poem

thank you so much for your lovely words. the day feels dreading and although I tried to seek the same comfort during the day that I find in the night but I failed

Some verses in which the lyrical speaker talks about day and night, sleeping and waking up, about darkness and wandering through the anguish of existence. Greetings, @surrealfia

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it was a battle when I was choosing day and night but it was an already decided battle - the night won. but the battle itself was strenuous and I believe some other people also feel that way. There's no bigger battle someone fights than the one they fight all by themselves with their own self. thank you so much

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German romanticism made the night the great subject of poetry. You return to that leitmotiv, with a striking composition, where night becomes the living space par excellence, and insomnia is inevitable. Greetings, @surrealfia.

thank you so much for your support... it's not just insomnia - it's also finding comfort in solitude than being in the crowd... I find myself more at ease with myself and in darkness than in the day where there's bustling crowd where I lose myself