"Gazes" (Original Poem)

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Gazes

Unattended gazes match the right person,
so the alarms and bells start ringing,
overlapping and underlapping,
secrets of gestures start to contain.

Within the charm of bashfulness,
the desires flourish,
not a single person is aware
of the tendered gazes exchanging.

No one is aware,
no one is making a sound,
only the rhythm in my heart is at its peak,
peeking at you to steal your gaze.

What shall I call when my heart
is alarmed at your touch.
At your embrace of looks from far,
you said not a single word,
but there I stood,
understanding it all.

I stared at your shades,
at your intense color change.
I was assured,
you, I want to explore.

Cascading time, paces away,
Starting to make me feel intense.
Can I stay or is it wrong?
Can I be or is it ill?
What sort of relationship is this?

Again our gazes meet,
you smile at me,
knowingly I smile at you,
unknowingly we breathe,
that's my yearning soul,
craving to reach you.

As days pass by,
the flare of emotions
isn't contained anymore.
Instantly I realize my place,
my place for you,
your place in me.

Unattended gazes match the right person,
yet we deviate.
He isn't made for me,
torture and suffering, aren't his.

Then the alarms and bells start ringing,
overlapping and underlapping,
secrets of gestures start to explode within,
how gazes can be controlled?

Within the gloom of desperation,
the desires tend to die.
Not a single person is aware,
not a single cry.

The tendered gaze,
exchanges no more.
Attends to no more glow,
I know I need to walk away,
and leave the floor.

He stands near the aisle,
I am unable to walk down the lane,
May I take upon a mask,
shield all my desires.
The lock upon the elements,
that choose you to admire.

At your embrace of looks from far,
I said not a single word,
but there you stood,
understanding it all.

Unattended gazes match the right person,
so the alarms and bells start ringing,
overlapping and underlapping,
secrets of gestures start to contain.

The End!


{Cover- Image from Pexels}


Theme of the poem: A poem dedicated to our beloved. Nothing is more precious than them, but nothing is more important than what we feel. When we feel that we aren't right for them, this poem is a tribute to such feelings which start to re-write our story all over again. We have no control over it yet we are the squished in it, maybe along with them.

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It's all perfect until we start thinking about it. So it goes.

A sad love poem. It's sad when our feelings for another person is only one- sided. You are wise to move on.

True. It is, and once you know that you will have to live with such feelings then it becomes tougher. It is quite depressing not to be up-to-the-mark for your loved one. I was out of connection for a very good time, it is good to be back. I am sorry for replying so late.

That is ok.

Can't help it but admire how intense and emotion seeking this poem is. The calmness and tension I feel the characters display is quite relatable. Thanks a lot for sharing ❤️❤️❤️😍

I am sure to be happy or sad as you could relate. I was quite hyped at that moment, I am mostly when I start contemplating if I am the right match for him. he deserves the best. Anyways, I am very happy to see your comment. I was out of connection for a very good time, it is good to be back. I am sorry for replying so late.

What shall I call when my heart
is alarmed at your touch.
At your embrace of looks from far,
you said not a single word,
but there I stood,
understanding it all.

At your embrace of looks from "afar"

I believe afar will flow better in the lines. This poem seems like a personal crush rather than a imaginary writing lol.

Nice write up, your choice of words matches the mood.

Yeah, you are right, afar would sound better. It didn't come into my head at that moment. Thanks a ton.

U are welcome

Great piece Tahmina. One of the main things that these writings made me feel was craving, yearning, in a discreet form.
Being more or less an introvert, I believe I got the intention behind the poem. When we go through infatuation, sometimes it is happening inside of us more than in reality. There is something sexy, fun, and fanciful about it, but it ends sour if nothing is done and until a new bell rings.
Thanks for sharing! take care.

About nothing being done, it is more like they understand each other. It was no more one-sided. She got the heads up. But, nothing was done, true. Introverts feel more I believe. Most of my friends end up being introverted and I am the crazy one, omnivert I guess.
I was out of connection for a very good time, it is good to be back. I am sorry for replying so late.

No worries. I get lost every two weeks or so, with mountains of work and other projects falling on top of me. Good that you're back! Thanks for replying anyway.
Have a good day.

A sensuous poem full of yearning for a distant love.

I stared at your shades,
at your intense color change.
I was assured,
you, I want to explore.

It's a haunting piece because one feels like the narrator is full of longing for a love that never quite materializes or it's impossible. Excellent!

Thank you so much. I am happy that you could relate to it. I was out of connection for a very good time, it is good to be back. I am sorry for replying so late. One month is a good time.

The message of your poem is truly relatable. Two similar beginnings, but different outcomes. How what could have been the best love story dies suddenly and naturally because we got cold feet due to fears of the unknown. Without even given the love a chance. This doesn't only happen on issues of love, we also see it play out in several other issues in our lives.

I read the "Unattended gaze" and the "alarms and bells start ringing" lines as if they are the "hook" of the poem. I saw what you did there @tahminasyed and I love it.

I haven't tried this style of poetry writing before, but in one of my future poems, I will give it a try. Hopefully I will execute it as good as you did. Much love.

PS: Do you mind if I reach out to you on discord @tahminasyed?

No, I wouldn't mind it at all. My user id is tahminasyed. Feel free to knock. I am looking forward to seeing your poems. It would be much better than mine, I believe. See you around.
I was out of connection for a very good time, it is good to be back. I am sorry for replying so late.

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