"Lonely eyes" (Original Poem)

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"Lonely eyes"

In this very instance,
you will see time fly by.
In this very instance,
memories will overlap existence.
In this very instance,
you will see the change.

The rough destination
corrupted by wounds,
hounding and rowling
all about the room.
Chaotic notion played along,
when gestures blind the soul.

Cases of mischief filled the air,
I knew the blessings missed the air.
Sprouted treachery aimed at me,
flared up once touched by breeze.
Shutting doors collapsed at once,
why am I the only standing one.

In the room filled with air,
who will get the oxygen? "Everyone there!"
Amidst the crowd stood a clown
who was led to believe in all.
"Leave instant! Take others to save themselves."

The clown left instant, taking others believing others.
The clown died, so did others,
is what which was thought by the malicious ones.
However, life took a turn and led the clown and others
to a forest further, unknown and safe.

The malicious spirits rotted inside,
with a lack of oxygen, tree, and air.
Pretense took the better of time,
thinking of leading others to deaths,
this engulfed them instead.
Death is true, death is real,
fakeness only fainted there.

In this very instance,
you will see people change.
In this very instance,
you will lose a friend.
In this very instance,
life will be spread.

The End!


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Story behind the verses: As you start stepping into maturity, you get the taste of reality, and trust me it is not that bad. You are able to distinguish between pretense and fakeness, that reality which teaches me such, I feel I am blessed to understand. However, the poem touches the facts and leads the realizing soul rest. Yes, you may feel blessed but it is also true that you are hurt and you will need time to heal. You will pass through.

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Death is true, death is real,
fakeness only fainted there.

We all go through complicated situations in life, but we must have the courage to move forward, regardless of what has happened we must always have the courage to move forward and seek our happiness, as we grow up many people leave us by the wayside, thank you for sharing.

Yes, true. your words are true, this is what happens but we need to keep on learning and going.

Death is true, death is real, and we all need to learn to live in the now!
Really nice poem. I loved it and the message it passes

Thank you so much. So stay connected.

Sure thing. That's par of why I'm here. To connect.
You're welcome

We learn from experience in our life
And know about truth or false

True, experience, learning from others, hearing from others, these are all we have.

Each instance of an instant an infinity expands before us. It all depends on our choice! !PIZZA

Indeed, it does.

This poem has a beautiful melancholic air.

Thank you so much.

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"In this very instance,
you will see time fly by.
In this very instance,
memories will overlap existence."
This. I think that the thought of memories overlapping existence is a conflict of some of us, whose longing for past times, or maybe the missing of people, can even be blinding while time keeps ticking as you write so eloquently.
"Death is true, death is real,
fakeness only fainted there."
I sympathize very much with this fragment because what I can take from it is that only in death, fakeness will disappear, which blew my mind.
Other thoughts that came to my mind while reading it were:
Love the imagery, and how nature references were a central subject in it.
You are a true magician with words, your poem took me on a rollercoaster of sensations and arguments, and I was glad of how it advanced.
Thanks for sharing! Best wishes.

Thank you so much. I am always looking forward to your creative replies. Being able to relate is a blessing I feel. Even though it is fragmented, I feel we have the power to reconnect them.