"Unsettling" (Original Poem)

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Unsettling

Timeline of thoughts,
breakthrough the doors.
What implies on me,
standing in the queue?

What breaks my thoughts,
those little ones,
who brushes through me,
making me lean.

The innocent face,
turns me high,
entangles the feelings by.
The little face,
turns me high,
refreshing my feelings by.

The broken spaces,
broken humor,
crushes from above.

While the untold promises,
leaves the road,
uprooted by challenges,
intertwined.

Some instances are for a lifetime,
for some are for minute time.
Some instances are for a lifetime,
for some are for minute time.

We end up letting go of all that,
while disbelieving it all.
We end up letting go of all that
while disbelieving it all.

Letting hollowness consume our soul,
while awaiting deepens the scars.
Rusted bruises often hurt more,
piercing the skin,
ending up without healing.
ending up without bearing.
Ending up without fearing,
all the wounds are open.

The unsettling words,
disturbs my inner peace,
while my soul is awake,
how can I sleep?

Timeline of thoughts,
breakthrough the doors.
What implies on me,
standing in the queue?

What breaks my thoughts,
those little ones,
who brushes through me,
making me lean.

The unsettling words,
disturbs my soul,
while my inner peace is awake,
how can I sleep?

The End!


{Cover- Image from Dream}


Theme of the poem: Unsettling
There are times in our life we feel consumed, tired. It is not like we do not have any motivation but our inner peace is hampered. We used to believe that feelings and emotions were great and were at their peak, as time passes, we learn that nothing is in sync. No one will stick to you unless you run behind them. No one will fall stay awake for you, no one will wait for you, no one will push you, there is no one out there. You were the only one who yearned to push, who yearned to be the gear, no one else has time for that. Everyone is settled in their own world. You learn all this, but now you are too overwhelmed and numb to know why is it like this. There was this spark in you that always told you the opposite, it seems that it is disappearing, you are left in the wave, all alone, to sink.

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Very nice poem and I agree with you, most of the time it's you against the world, you have no one but yourself, without neglecting God and believe me you will be fine like that, it costs but I think if you can, thanks for this great writing ♥

The struggle goes on and on. True that. Thank you so much for your support.

It's natural for us to feel down but the most important thing is that we don't stay down. Nicely written

Some think they should commit suicide, but only few realize what is to be done.

You're so right. Our life is ours to save. No one owes you anything.

Yes, indeed. Yet, we look up and search for people to show us the way, for people to guide us.

This is just so beautiful.. I so much love the way you expressed your emotions through this poem. I totally agree with your point of view on this subject.

Keep it up.

Thank you for supporting me. Life seems to be too much troublesome.

That's just the way it is.. We just have to remain focused despite all situations

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