The Album of Souls

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As soon as he turned the page, they immediately heard a scream. A woman's scream, hard and thin, as if it shattered their ears!

"Be quiet, sssstupid woman. Screaming reduces your chances of survival," said the flame-eyed devil. And he was about to turn the page of the photo album where the souls were imprisoned when his client, a woman in a white dress, began to speak;

"Why is that woman screaming?" He asked. He pointed to the woman in the photo. There was a woman with her hands on her cheeks, with an expression of never ending fear. And she was moving? Like slightly. Her hands were moving to her mouth and her eyes were jumping around...

"Oh, thissss one died of fear. It is not a very valuable soul, she did not help anyone nor follow any gods, she was just living.... but if you are looking for a cheap soul you can have it ahahah" replied the devil. The gold chains at the end of his horns shook as he laughed.

"No, thanks" said the woman in the white dress.

He turned the photo album again, each page with only one soul in it, he seemed to be looking for the next page, and as if he had found something, hah! said the devil.

"That'ssss it! You need this guy," and he pointed to the moving photo.

A man in his 40s, with experience in his hair. He was dressed in thick, shiny armor, but his armor bore the scars of war. Perhaps the red marks on his armor could be the liquid she guessed. But the man was very angry and calm. He put down his thick sword and waited with his hands folded in front of him. Like planning... The customer asked;

"And who is this man?"

"He isssss a paladin. He is a holy warrior. He has killed many evil creaturessss. He fought hard for his god. He is famous for protecting his friends. Once, he even defended a ssssssmall town until dawn. He managed to defend against goblins when the locals didn't even know how to shoot an arrow. And he saved the town from these goblinssss. So his soul is worth a lot of money," Devil said.

"And how did it end up in this soul album?" the customer in the white dress added.

"I came to his aid at a very bad moment ahahahah and offered him to wrap his soul around me in exchange for the ssssalvation of his friends. He accepted ahahaha!" said the devil.

"How much gold?"

"10.000"

"Isn't this a bit expensive?"

"That's the price. If I had his body, it would be worth 50,000 gold coinssss!"

"Well..."

The customer, woman in the white dress, put her hand to her chin. She thought. The devil in front of her waited patiently. As if he knew that sooner or later she would accept his proposal. He already knew all the valuables she is carrying. And waited...

And waited...

"Then we have a deal." She said and took out the bag of gold from the bag hanging on her waist. Then she counted one by one and put 9500 thousand gold coins on the table. Then she took out a necklace worth about 500 gold coins. All her money was gone.

After taking the gold, the devil took the photo album and tore out the page with the man.
Then he handed this moving photo to the woman.

"And how do I get him off this page?" the woman in the white dress asked.

"Oh, baby! You ssssshould be more careful when dealing with the Devil. This information will cost you extra"

"I thought it would be like this." Said the woman in the white dress and picked up the photo with a huff. She went outside.

She closed the door and looked at the robot she had brought with her on her way here.

2.5 meters tall, carrying a thick sword on its back. Then the woman opened a piece on the robot's chest. She put the photograph she had in her hand there.

The man in the photo was standing now. He was slowly moving in anticipation.

I'm sorry, James. I hope this works.

The woman closed the part on the robot's chest. The eyes of this robot began to emit a yellow light.

The eyes, opened.

"James?" she said.
"Are you there? Do you even remember me?" She added...

The robot's head bobbed up and down in approval. And its eyes were fixed on the devil's door, which it craved a revenge.

Which he, craved a revenge.

...

This story is written for Inkwell Fiction Prompt - Photo Album, and inspired by the dungeons and dragons games.

Thank you so much for reading, I hope you liked it 🙏

Leonardo ai is used for the photo.

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Wow. This story was amazing. I liked it very much. I kept reading until the end, holding my breath. The idea of the devil selling souls in a photo album is very creative.❤️

Thank you so much 🙏 it came to me as soon as I saw the prompt because I'm reading dnd books now 😀😁😁

Oh, a soul that hates the Devil!
I found the story fascinating because of the epic setting and the narrative is very welcoming. The devil may be a very clever swindler, but who knows if one day the weight of revenge will fall upon him.

Absolutely it should. The universe is at equilibrium. Evil and good has their times but at the end, in dnd, mostly evil is blocked. 💪

Your story-telling is fascinating :) It got me hooked to the end. I love how your words made me see vivid images on my mind hehe.

Thank you so much it is really important for me to be able to create a picture with words. English is not my main language, but I'm trying 😄😁

You absolutely nailed it and it's impressive especially since English isn't your first language.

I'm so happy thank you kindly ☺ 🙏

I really liked the story, it's really captivating. The devil's business with souls and a revenge that apparently will be carried out from the body of a robot. Excellent work.

Thanks for sharing.
Good day.

Im happt that you liked it 🙏 thank you kindly for the comment 🤗🙏

Hmm

So interesting with deeper meaning. Well, I think the repetition of words where done purposely right?

Also, did the woman in white know the soul was James or the robot was James and she used a soul to bring back James

Yes that is correct. All these questions can be answered on next week's episode ahahha 😄 jokes aside, both can be true depending on how you want to read it 🙏

eheheheh..

well, thats cool too
Lol, so we should expect a part 2

No I don't think so 😄😄 that is not how inkwell works but if a lot of people requests it I don't see why not 😄😄

I like to leave the endings of the stories open ended. So reaader can finish it themselves in their head 🙏🤗

Hehehe
Ok
😉
I saw what you did there

Perfectly paced to intrigue and engage the reader.

Your brilliantly devised plot makes for a scintillating read from start to finish—how clever to “give” a robot the “soul” for revenge.
Excellent fiction that wakes tired souls!

Thank you so much 🙏 and thanks for the inspiration as well 💪🙏

It's such an interesting read, and I didn't see the twist coming.

Thank you so much 🙏

Greetings, @arduilcelebren !
Your story has been selected to be part of The Ink Well's 130rd Magazine. Thank you for your presence in the community.
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