The wound dies but the scars often remain

in #hive-1707982 years ago

I had just met him, and through our conversations, I knew he was in the streets and I was drawn to the danger. I wanted to be a part of something that pumps my adrenaline a bit more than just reading and writing. I got disappointed when I found out he left the street a while back because of circumstances he refused to open up to me.
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I wasn't mad, I just allowed it, because I knew one day when he is comfortable with sharing, he will. These days, he has been filling me in with lots of his past, and history, especially the dangerous part that has everything to do with the street.

I am fascinated but at the same afraid for him. There is something I do know especially the ideologies that get repeated in screenplays and that's the possibility of one's past coming back to haunt them no matter how fast one runs. And running did he do!

Although he hasn't told me everything, I am asking him to do it in bits when he feels like it, because trying to pour everything out brings him to tears. And I don't like seeing him in pain. It has to be that this part of his still hurt, even though he left it behind, a long time ago. Which is why trying to talk about it makes him teary.

"Darling, when I remember the incident that caused my relocation, I feel bad for the choices I made in my life then", he says every time an incident happens that brings the memory back.

" It's okay. The most important thing is that you have left all that behind you and you are a changed person", I'll respond while patting his back to show my support.

"Sweetheart, you don't understand. I lost my close friend because of that...", His voice always trails off once he gets to this point.

" Shh, try not to speak, you can tell me about it, another time", I'll tell him while holding my finger to his lips.

" It was all my fault, I...I... I", the words often get stuck as usual

" I have told you it's fine to not talk about it at the moment, I don't want you shaken up and broken right now", I'll whisper while holding up a caring and comforting face

He breathes heavily, and then slowly, as he tries to swallow the tears that struggle to be let out.

While I try to console or comfort him, I silently pray his past won't come knocking one day. Although, deep down, I would love to see how it plays out. But I am aware that's selfish, because I have a feeling, it may not end well. And I wouldn't want that to happen to him seeing that I love him very much.

So, I'll rather allow his past to stay in the past instead of trying to raise the dust just because I need a storyline to expand upon. You can't blame me though, as a writer, I am fascinated by good stories.

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@killerwot(4/10) tipped @atomz (x1)

I was eager to know what he did and truly, some things from the past should never be dug out but as a wife, i think it's important to know as well

Great story.

Smiles. As a girlfriend, you mean 😅

Great story, it felt like i was present in your world, witnessing every thing and in suspense of what the future holds for you too.

I am impressed by your writing, thanks @atomz for sharing😃

Thank you. I am glad you liked it.

Good stories certainly are a great thing, but it must be so tough when the author of that story is a fear-stricken, and teary-eyed person you love. It's sometimes better to leave the past where it belongs in those situations, or maybe it would be better to reach out to a counselor or someone to help communicate the feelings in a healthy way.

I felt sad while reading your story, it must be a scary thing to wonder if the past will ever come back.

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I'll leave it in the past even though I want to hear it so badly so I can weave a story out of it.

I'm sorry for making you feel sad. Yes, I'm not sure if there's anyone who would love to revisit their past. Especially if it's one with lots of scars.

Thanks for reading.

You have achieved the most important objective for every writer: You caught my interest. I wanted to know more. It's not exactly that you teased, but you did open a door and invite me (the reader) to have a look. You show restraint in not asking the other about 'his' past. With that restraint, you create a kind of tension. The less you want to know, the more we want to know.

In the end I (the reader) feel a bit frustrated. While you choose not to know more, we don't make that choice. We persevere through the story because we want to know.

What you do here is totally legitimate. You give us all the clues and explain why we will not know more. And yet... we want to know :))

Great writing. I did, however want to know a little more about the mystery man--at least something about his relationship to you.

Ouch! I feel bad for not pushing it because you guys would have loved to know more.

But I'll make a promise. When he is finally comfortable enough to share the last part, I'll write another #creativenonfiction post towing that angle.

And maybe, this time, my relationship with the mystery man will be revealed.

Is that alright, @agmoore? I hope I am forgiven.🙏🏿

It is a wonderful piece. Precisely because it is effective, we want to know more. No aspersions on this great writing intended :)

Thank you very much. ❣️