That Still Small Voice.


source


Oftentimes, we get that intense gut feeling that repeats itself more than once in our head, the little voice of advice and warning that I regret not listening to that fateful day.

I used to have a powerbank that saved me most of the time when there was no power supply. I had a faulty charger that I knew was faulty but I kept on using it since it still worked. The still small gut feeling voice kept telling me “buy another charger Esther, do not wait until it spoils something that would cost more than the charger” but still I would not listen until the day light came and I was trying to wiggle the cord on the faulty charger to get it to start working when I heard a spark “Ah” I said to myself “it has finally happened” why did I not listen, I sigh. I later got some money from my salary and purchased a new powerbank and a good functioning charger, all was going well and this new one even lasted longer than my previous one as I have used that one for a very long time already.

The time came when I was to go for a job as an adhoc staff for the elections in my country Nigeria where I had to stay overnight and start work the next day and I did not want to go out with my new power bank. I was initially using it to power my phone before I left the house as there was no electricity that moment and I did not want to leave with a flat phone. I was contemplating within myself if I should just keep the power bank in my room or give it to my younger brother to charge when PHCN brings light.

My gut feeling was more strong when it urged me to keep the powerbank and wait till my return to charge but i did not listen I kept on saying to myself “what could go wrong, even if he used it he will still charge it” and so I left the house that evening after entrusting the power bank to my brother.

After two days I returned home hoping to see my power bank fully charged and ok, only for me to discover that it was no longer working. I was so angry, I almost cried. I kept asking “what happened to my power bank?” And all I heard were stories upon stories but what could I do, it was spoiled and I could not ask him to payback.

I took it to my room, and kept trying to get it to work with tear filled eyes. Ah! If only I had just listened to my gut feeling this would not have happened to me.


The End

Thanks for Reading!

Sort:  

Before we can curate this piece, kindly correct your image sourcing. The current link takes the reader to the iStock library instead of taking us to the dedicated page for the image concerned. It is therefore not clear whether or not the image is being used in contravention of copyright legislation or not. iStock images are not royalty-free, so if you did not purchase the rights to use this image then you will need to remove it from your post and select another image instead.

Hello, I am sorry about the image, I got the picture from pexel but it was under the istock section and I did not notice. I have corrected it now. Thank you.

Thank you for writing in The Ink Well and for making the requisite changes to your image.

That must have been incredibly frustrating losing two power banks in a row like that, especially when you had a strong feeling on both occasions that you should have done X and then did Y instead. Perhaps there is a lesson in there that your post is acknowledging. It would have been useful to see more development of the story in showing why you felt uneasy with your decision to leave your battery bank with your brother, and then to flesh out what actually happened to it under your brother's care instead of brushing over the detail here. It left me wanting more.

To learn more about the craft of fictional short stories, check out our catalog of fiction writing tips. To learn more about the creative nonfiction genre and what we're looking for, read our FAQ and tips for success.

Keep writing!

It was truly frustrating. Yes I see I could have written it better, I will do well to note the corrections.

Thank you 🤗

Congratulations @elentiyaroberts! You have completed the following achievement on the Hive blockchain And have been rewarded with New badge(s)

You received more than 9000 upvotes.
Your next target is to reach 10000 upvotes.

You can view your badges on your board and compare yourself to others in the Ranking
If you no longer want to receive notifications, reply to this comment with the word STOP

Check out our last posts:

Be ready for the August edition of the Hive Power Up Month!
Women's World Cup Contest - Recap of day 10
Women's World Cup Contest - Recap of day 9

What a painful experience. I can't even begin to narrate how I would have felt if I were in your shoes.
This our country that light is never constant, I do hope you get a new power bank soon. After the incident that occurred in the last picnic with my fellow teachers.

I learnt to listen to my instinct, sometimes I might want to carry something to a place and my instinct urges me to carry that thing and put in my bag, if I disobey, I will end up forgetting that stuff at home.

I got a new one.

Thank you, we should really listen to our intuition.

That's very good, power bank helps a lot. It's very necessary we do.