The greatest gift a parent can give a child is self-confidence

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“If you work up your grades this year, you'll have a trip to the fair.”

Those were the words that kept him awake every night, practicing math problems. He even walked up to Rhina, the smartest girl in his grade to give him a brief science lesson. There was no way he was going to miss this once-in-a-lifetime opportunity.
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Willie had never been anywhere with his dad.

“He used to take you to the radio when you were a baby. Now, he seems to have forgotten he birthed kids” Willie didn't understand what that meant. How could his father not take cognizance of the fact that he had a brown-haired 9-year-old and a curly, blonde-haired 4-year-old living in the same house with him?

“Your father is a busy man” his mother always replied when Willie asked why he never played or spoke with them. The day he turned 7, his father promised him a birthday cake but didn't return home that day.

It was at the end of the last year when he came home with his grade sheet that his father had spoken to him for the first time in almost a year.

“Your grades are bad.” he tapped the sheet and looked up at his wife. “Really Ash? Your kids don't even do well in school.” Willie had never heard his mom talk back. She would only bow her head like she did that day, wiping tears off her face. It was then his father turned back to him and made that promise.

He wouldn't have taken it seriously if his mother hadn't walked into the room, he shared with his sister that night to tuck him in. He was too big for that, but he loved it and secretly wished she did it every night.

“Hey, you can do better at school. Right?”

“I'll try” he looked into her puffy eyes then traced his eyes down her pale face. His uncle Joe had once said that his mother was a baby who had two babies on her hands. She was just sixteen when she had him.

“I used to be the second best in fifth grade. No matter how hard I tried, I ended up as second best so I know how you feel and how hard it can be to try being better. But if you put your whole heart to it, you'll get it done.”

“I want to be better, Mom. But how do I know dad’s gonna take me?”

“Even if he doesn't, I will”. She didn't need to say another word.

Now as he ran home with his grade sheet in his hands and tears streaming down his face, he had come out with 4 As, math inclusive, two Cs, and a D in science. It was way better than the F he was used to getting.

“Mom! Mom! I did it!” Ashley scooped him up in her hands, twirled him around, and covered his face in kisses.

“I'm so proud of you, my Chocolate. Wait till your father sees this”.

His father only picked his teeth uninterestedly.

“If you do better in science next year…”

“Stop!” it was the first time his mother raised her voice at his dad. She turned to him, “The fair is in two days and we're going. You can stay at home if you won't come with us.”

Willie brushed his brown hair back and straightened his checked shirt.

“You're going to have the fun of your life” his mother had said the night before, and he believed her.

Their father had let them take the car grudgingly but that did not move his mother one bit. The minute he held out the keys, she grabbed them and led the kids to the car. She seemed to be very excited herself like the adventure was for her, and not the kids.

“The last time I was at the fair, I was 12,” she told Willie as she drove. “Then, I got five deep-fried candy bars and got constipated when I returned home.”

The fair was everything he had imagined.

There were carnival rides, food vendors selling everything from corn dogs to funnel cakes, games, livestock shows, arts and crafts displays, and live music.

The smell of fried food caused his stomach to rumble, his mother had promised to let him try whatever he wanted so he began with that.

“Fried Macaroni and cheese please,” he said to the concessionaire who had a huge smile for himself and his sister.

When he had eaten to his heart's content, he insisted on being on the Ferris wheel.

“I want some fried candle bars!” his sister cried when they passed another food booth.

And Ashley indulged them, letting them have the fun of their lives, just as she had promised.

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I guess Willie kind of knew his dad wouldn't take him to the fair regardless of his performance and his nonchalant dad didn't disappoint despite his son's academic improvement.

I like how you made Willie's mother stand for her son and most especially for herself against her husband. A well written story I must say.

I love that his mom did not allow his dad to rob him of his happiness after he put in the effort to do better in school. Thank you for reading ❤️

What a beautiful story. Keeping promises to children is very important especially when they make the effort to do better in school. I liked that the mother and the children had fun. it was perfect!
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Thank you darling. I am happy his mum took up for him too and he got rewarded for improving.

So glad to see Ashley finally had the courage to not let her husband ruin her children's happiness with his grumpy attitude.

Yeah. She stood up for them. Thank you for reading.

Hello, @iskawrites

I was very moved by the story. I admired the mother's determination and how she made good on the promise she did not make, I think the child got the reward for the effort: enjoying the fair.

Congratulations on your vivid writing.

Greetings.

Yes, the child got rewarded. And yes, his mom made good on that promise even though it wasn't her place to fulfill it. Thank you for reading ❤️

The child shows great initiative to achieve a goal. Sadly, the father is not very supportive. Fortunately, the mother rewards her children with a timeless memory. I'm still shaking my head about the father though 😔 I like how you used this father character to put an obstacle, conflict, and motivation for the child. Perseverance pays against all odds.

I'm still shaking my head about the father though 😔

There are parent like this. All anyone can do is shake their heads 😔

I like how you used this father character to put an obstacle, conflict, and motivation for the child. Perseverance pays against all odds.

Thank you so much 💝

Awwwwgh! Irrespective of dads misgivings they did it😁

Lol.. yes they did 🙃

Fathers who are barely around and mothers who are overly submissive, sounds really familiar hehe. This was a beautiful piece Iska, I like how the mom was always there to show her support.

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Within the context of a simple story about going to the fair, you weave a secondary, more significant story: a father who neglects his family. At the heart of this story is this compelling theme: A mother who married too young; A father who takes advantage of the mother's vulnerability; A child bride, who grows into womanhood and learns to stand up for her children, though she did not have the courage to stand up for herself.

This is a sophisticated, subtle narrative, @iskawrites. We are angry with the father, but you do not excoriate him. You allow readers to make their own judgement, based on the information you provide. A simple day at the fair becomes a family drama in your piece.

Good job, @iskawrites.

Thank you so much for the feedback @theinkwell. I am so happy for this beautiful comment. I appreciate 💝

My heart aches at the father's behavior. Some parents failed to understand that corrective measures is not always about negative reward as we call it in education. Positive rewards tends to function more potently. A child that was failing her subjects before improved and passed his subjects but the dad rather than appreciating the positive strides, held on to the negative one. That's insensitivity to the plight of the family.
@iskawrites, you did justice to this prompt.

"Insensitive to the plight of the family" . I love this.

It's a typical dad behavior. We are only asked if the person who got first place had three heads in Africa.. lol. I apologize for laughing over a sensitive topic

Thank you so much for your appreciation 💝

You are welcome dear.

What kind of dad is Willie's father, thank God his mom fulfilled the promise his dad couldn't. He would have the greatest fun of his life at the funfair. I love your story sister 🤗

Hahaha

What kind of dad is Willie's father

This lady, you are asking me 😆😆

I love your story sister 🤗

Thank you so much darling 😍

Aww so sad, that was a very bad father and even sadly to realize that some of my friends and classmates has the same story of willie😪

These things do happen in most families. I am sorry to hear that you have near experiences of such incidents in the lives of your classmates 😔

Your story is relatable to some of us in the world today. Fathers that barely care which is bad. You dived into various topics with one simple and short story. Nicely done.

Thank you so much. I am glad you could relate. I appreciate your visit. Happy weekend.

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I thought the father would go with them at the last minute, that's disheartening. Things like this go a long in kid's mental health. Whatever, I can relate to the part of doing good in exams with the expectations of getting something of my desire.

Good one.

I am sorry, but this particular father was adamant and he did not care about his child's mental health.

Yes, we all can relate to doing our best with something in hopes of getting rewarded. Thank you for visiting.