A beautiful career is ruined for love.

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Assalamu Alaikum.How are you all?Hope everyone is doing very well by the infinite mercy of the great creator. Alhamdulillah I am also healthy now with your prayers. I am starting my today's blog by greeting everyone sincerely.

Today I came with a completely different kind of post. I love to write and read stories. I try to write stories whenever I get time. I like to write stories based on real events. That's why I try to write stories based on the happenings around. Anyway let's start--- The hero heroine of this story is Trina and Tanmoy. Tanmoy is a child of middle class family. He is very good at studies since childhood. Always was first in class. His father was no end of pride for this. They are three siblings. Tanmoy grew up in the village. He was tutored by one of his maternal grandparents since childhood.

All the school teachers like Tanmay very much. Thus ended his school life. He was admitted in class six. After a few months, a grandfather from the neighboring house told Tanmay's father that it would be better to enroll his son in a madrasa. From then on, Tanmoy started studying in a madrasa. From there he passed SSC and HSC. After that, Tanmoy passed the admission test in Dhaka University and was admitted to the Islamic History Department. Then they came to Dhaka. His parents were very happy about this. Thus they lead a very beautiful life. But suddenly Tanmay's father died. Then his life turned upside down.

The responsibility of the family comes over Tanmay. Because he was the eldest son. He still could not complete his honors. He didn't do any kind of tuition or work while his father was there. But after his father died, he became disoriented. Then he got a job in a coaching center. Meanwhile, Tanmay's sister started tutoring to help the family. This is how Tanmoy completes the honours. After that he enrolled in Masters and completed that too. But then he made a mistake. While studying for Masters, he met a girl at his friend's wedding. The girl's name is Trina. After that the whole time talking with that girl on the mobile phone.

When Tanmoy finishes his Masters while preparing for BCS, the girl is pressured by her family to get married. If Tanmoy doesn't do it then Trina will be married off somewhere else. Then Tanmay's mother, brothers and sisters all forbade her to marry but she did not listen. Then he said that he will keep the cabin and get a job and bring it up. Then Tanmay's mother agreed and they had a cabin. His entire life was ruined because of this wrong decision. Once you get married, more responsibilities increase. Then there is no study like before.

Same happened with Tanmoy, he was such a good student but he couldn't get into BCS cadre. But his friends are doing government jobs after passing BCS. Thus, with the passage of time, the certificate expires. Now it is not possible for him to do government job. Meanwhile, he brings Trina to perform the ceremony. Tanmoy now does a small job. She also has a daughter. One wrong decision of his can mess up everything. He now realizes how big a mistake he made. But the words don't say, the time that passes never comes back.

Tanmoy ruins his beautiful career to get the man he loves.That's why it is said to use the time properly and never take a decision before making a decision. Then good for you. Otherwise there will come a day when your back is against the wall and there is nothing you can do. Anyway, I'm done here for today. See you again with a new post. Until then everyone stay well, stay healthy and stay safe.


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Hello @nahid43,

You have the essentials of a creative nonfiction story in this piece. However, we must call a few issues to your attention so that you can successfully post in this community.

One rule that all authors are required to observe: You are asked to comment on the stories of two other authors in the community for each story that you post here.

Another point we would like to make: Generally, we keep religious sentiments out of our stories because we have authors from many different cultures and many different religions, so we find it best to keep religious sentiments private.

Another issue is something that is called author intrusion. You can find an extended explanation of this in our blog on writing tips,here. An example of author intrusion in your piece--

That's why it is said to use the time properly and never take a decision before making a decision. Then good for you. Otherwise there will come a day when your back is against the wall and there is nothing you can do.

Moralizing, or offering advice such as you have done here is not good form. It is best to leave the readers to draw their own conclusions. If you have written a piece well, the moral will be apparent.

We hope these tips help you to write more successfully in the Inkwell community. We look forward to reading your stories as your writing skills develop.