The Inkwell Prompt #56 - DUSTY STARS

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Mikaél heard a knock so gentle that he doubted his ears for a split second. Now wide awake, he got up from the rags that made up his beddings. The sand underneath his feet shifted a little but not enough to rock him.

Mikaél picked up his water bottle to find that there was barely enough to last through the night...maybe the next day if he sparingly drank.

Mikaél sat back down on his bedding and gradually begun packing his old looking belongings that where as dry as where he sat. He put the small lamp into his backpack, next was a rough looking blanket, and then his toothbrush.

Mikaél was suddenly startled once again after he was interrupted by the calm knock yet again. He quickly rushed to the opening of the tent hoping to find someone but could only see the vastness of what laid ahead of him.

Once atop his ragged beddings, Mikaél continued to pack his belongings into his backpack. A tin plate that previously held dried meat, a shard of glass to help signal for help, and then the small water bottle. He put the small compass in his pocket and stepped out of the tent.

After folding and packing the tent into the bag, Mikaél turned to face the challenge he had faced for 6 days...the cruel desert. He looked up at the stars and then his compass and then back at the stars as he made his way westward.

Mikaél had needed only the second day to realise that traveling at night in the desert was far better than when the sun was up. The desert sun was just on another level to what Mikaél had come to know, it made him drink more, quickly exhausting the 4 bottles he had at the beginning of the journey and the worst thing he learnt about traveling in the desert in the day were the mirages.

Mikaél always viewed himself as a patient person that only took decisions after carefully contemplating it but the mirages he saw on the second day of his journey made him act erratically, running towards the seeming oasis that always turned out false. He had exhausted a lot of energy in those runs which had eventually sipped out a little more of his hope.

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As Mikaél moved westward he thought of what he left behind. He used to have a family, a mother, a brother, sisters...a home in Ashkebän. He remembered this mother abruptly waking him up at the dead of night, telling him he had to leave quickly. She had heard the decision the council would take and had arranged safe passage for her calm intelligent son, whose only sin was to stand up in defiance of the ruler’s son’s unrequited approach towards his sister. He might have gone a little too far but it was undeserving of the punishment he would have been handed for accidentally scarring the ruler's son’s eye.

Drinking the last drops of water, Mikaél staggered on slowly. He had left his backpack a few miles before. He was so thirsty that hunger seemed like a distant sensation. Mikaél fell on the sand, surrendering to his fate. Maybe death was his punishment or maybe his reward for defending his Sheáray, his sister. He whispered a prayer for her, for his calm and thoughtful mother, for his family and his consciousness faded.

Mikaél awoke to the feel of water rushing down his body. He was slightly startled to find himself naked. He looked around to see 5 or 6 women standing over him. Looking around, he saw that he was sitting in an old bath in a huge tent.

Mikaél jumped out the bath and grabbed a blanket, while facing a number of women that seemed to have doubled in just a few minutes. That was his first introduction to the Ashayans.

2 weeks passed with Mikaél living with the Ashayans. They lived a nomadic life, mastering the desert which 2 weeks before, Mikaél had thought was unforgiving. They moved flawlessly from one oasis to another never staying one place for long.

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How are you feeling”, Mayama asked as she sat beside Mikaél by the fireplace.

I'm much better”, was the response she got as Mikaél smiled back at her.

You have done well the past few days. The tribe leaders have asked you to stay”, Mayama looked at Mikaél with hopeful eyes. “I'm sure the sheep will bleat louder at you”.

This life you live is a perfection I could never hope to have”, Mikael replied after almost 10 minutes of a silence that was intermittently interrupted by the crackling of burning wood. “I don’t know if I deserve this. I was...

Mikaél and Mayama were suddenly interrupted by loud startling shouts. The sudden rowdy movement around the camp indicated that something was wrong.

What is wrong”, Mayama asked one of the men running towards the leaders’ tent.

Raiders...raiders are upon us”, was the reply she got.


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Eres magia al escribir 🔥🔥🔥🧘🏾💞

muchas gracias. tu voz es magica. Soy un gran admirador.

🥰🙏🎶🌸🧘🏾💞gracias 🙏

de nada

Perfection is an illusion, just like the oases he was chasing and they turn out false.

Charming story @piratethanos.

Thanks yaziris for stopping by.

Ohkay. Wow. Not disappointed again. Now I'm wondering if it's the ruler who found him? Would he get married? Hehe.

I can't see myself in a desert for a million years. I love how you construct your characters and how much life you give to your stories.

@deraaa, the wonderful. The desert is home to some of the most endearing tribes. I reckon you might enjoy it more than you think.

Never been there. Have you? Or you read about it?

I have...once. You feel so insignificant in the dunes

You should take me 🙄. You have to take me 😒

Just tell me when you'd be ready so we can attempt it. We'll have a guide and backpacks. Next time I wanna try to venture in a little more

Let's wait for the whole Covid issue to die down... Hehehehe. (This is the part where I run because I'm sure that you'd find me after the COVID issue dies down).

COVID issues huh? There isn't any COVID issues where I am anymore, plus where we are going their won't be any either.

Eager to read what happens next after the raiders set upon them :)

Cliffhangers, remember? Hahaha. Thanks for dropping by.

Oh my running shoes!!!!!
I feel for the young man who will eventually run to his hiding or face the raiders.
Hahahaha
Nice story you've got here.
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Facinating story, what Mikaél thought was perfection had its own downside.

Thank you for sharing that story with The Ink Well, we appreciate your engagement in the community by commenting on other writers' stories.

Thanks you guys. I don't know if I followed the writing assignment/style for this week's prompt though.

This story is great I felt bad for Mikeal as the story went on and it ends on such a cliffhanger! Hopefully they are okay.

They will be

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Thanks a lot. This is awesome.

Raiders...raiders are upon us”

Even when Mikael felt they had a perfect life, nothing was actually perfect. They had troubles too.

Do you think he's cursed?

Not really, I didn't see him as the cause for their misfortune though I don't know why he kept hearing someone knock

Maybe it's his curse knocking on his mind

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