Fiction Prompt #123 - The Legend Has Returned

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In the past, the world was shaken by cruelty and destruction. Ideology, class, and business are fought so that all countries in the world are fighting and fighting wars. Oppression and colonization are commonplace in every country. Many people lost their homes and lives. Grief and tears are meaningless. Even so, people talk a lot about this legendary figure who can be a hope for peace.

From the stories circulating, the legendary figure was able to face the bombs that shook the earth, against missile attacks that destroyed cities, and laughed at the bullets that were launched. This legendary invincible figure did not stand for a nation, but he stood as a protector of the innocent in a heartbreaking World War. The legendary figure will come to save children trapped in the ruins, injured women, and elderly people who have lost hope. They all became the focus of his struggle.

One day, when a village was invaded by a group of military, a military man brutally shot the village indiscriminately. All the villagers ran scared. Cries and screams were heard loudly in the village.

"Listen, everyone! This village is now ours and will be our combat training ground" Said one of the armed military.

"This is our homeland, I will not let you take our land" shouted a brave young man.

While pointing the gun at the young man the military would shoot the young man, "How dare you! Feel this!"

As hundreds of bullets rained down on the brave young man, the figure of a legendary hero appeared and took all the bullets away with one move. Everyone was stunned to see the legendary figure. They all fell silent, and several of the militaries turned pale with fright at the sight of this legendary figure. Even their legs were shaking.

"What are you guys looking at, quickly shoot him!" shouted the military leader.

Everyone obeys the superior's orders. All the armed military were shooting at the legendary figure and their bullets did not affect him. That legendary figure still stands against all the attacks from the military group.

Looking back, a legendary figure said to the youth from the village, "Quickly get the citizens away from here! I will defeat them!"

The young man immediately took the residents away from the village for a while. When the legendary figure took out his sword, many militaries were terrified and dripping with sweat. Some even urinate because the fear is too great. With a single slash, the sword sent out a wave of flames, and thunder rumbled from above the sky, striking the military group. A tank from the military fired at the legendary figure, but the tank's attack just snowballed to him. With a single blow of the sword, the tank was split in two.

The remaining military groups in the village ran in fear and dared not attack anymore. They backed down and surrendered. Not only in that village but in other places a legendary figure saves innocent people who are victims of war. Year after year passed, and the World War ended. The legendary figure is no longer seen, but his story continues to be talked about and told by every generation. The story becomes a myth shrouded in the mists of legend.

One day, when the world was at peace, a large explosion occurred at the United Nations office. People thought it was an act of terrorism. However, their guess was wrong. A large plane appeared from behind the clouds. The shape is not like a plane in general. When the plane doors opened, millions of armed troops came out and attacked the city and killed anyone who dared to oppose them. They are not only armed with sophisticated weapons but there are also a group of AI robots programmed to rule the world.

"Let's run fast, they will catch us" Shouted residents.

Everyone ran scared. But the armed groups and AI robots will not let them go. Everyone who ran was caught and put into their plane. Some were shot for resisting. At that time all the leaders of the country were meeting in one place. They will form a world alliance to repel armed foreign groups. After being investigated, the armed group came from outside the solar system. They were humans from different galaxies.

"Strike and shoot everyone" Shouted the military leader who was struggling against armed foreign groups.

"Sir, their weapons are more sophisticated, many of our troops have died and their numbers continue to grow!" Said one of the soldiers.

"Damn it! How could they have such a powerful combat robot?" the leader said.

"Should we go back, sir?" asked the soldier

"We can't give up! We have to protect the survivors!"

"But we can't win against them, only a miracle can drive them from this earth"

"You idiot! If you surrender, you will also die at their hands. Better to die fighting than to die surrendering"

"Yes sir! I'm sorry"

Amid a thunderous battle, the soldiers protecting the earth are increasingly overwhelmed by armed foreign groups. Just as the soldiers were about to be defeated, a flash of light from above in the sky flashed with a bright gleam. Turns out he's back. An unrivaled legendary figure has now returned to save people who were being attacked by armed foreign forces. With his ultimate sword techniques and moves, he succeeded in saving the earth and the people.

The end.

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How much action in your post, very entertaining to read. In wars, heroes stand out and sacrifice them for an ideal.

Thanks for sharing.
Good day.

Hi, thank you very much.
I love writing stories about action and fighting. If there were no blood rules in this community, I would probably write a very brutal story. 😊😊

Your story reminds me of Super Woman and Half of a yellow sun.
The former is a movie while the later is a novel.
Interesting!
Thanks for sharing

Hi, thank you very much. I don't know the story about Super Woman and Half of a yellow sun. That seems like an interesting story. I'm going to find out about Super Woman and Half of a yellow sun. And the story that I wrote, I was inspired by the character of the anime film entitled One Punch Man. The hero of that story cannot be defeated by anyone. 😊😊

What an incredibly imaginative story! Here we find no lack of action, yet it would be wonderful to see plot points emphasized in action. The best way to do this would be to tell this story from the perspective of an established main character. Please also note that we do require authors to use the prompt word in posts.

The Ink Well has some great resources in our catalog of fiction writing tips. For example, we have tips on developing characters in your stories, and integrating action, dialog and narrative. These resources can help you learn how to include the important elements of fiction in your stories. We hope this feedback helps! Thank you for sharing your story with us, and for your engagement with other members of the community.

Okay, thank you. I will learn more about plot points emphasized in action. I'm going to learn how to include important elements of fiction in my stories. Thank you very much for your feedback. 😊😊