Ink Well Prompt #75 - Super Hero From Sukatani Village

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On Sunday mornings in Sukatani village, the residents carry out their usual activities. The farmers went to the fields, the fishermen went to the sea, the traders went to the market, and the children there played happily. From a small house, there was a scream from a woman.

“Tino, get up quickly. It's already 9:00 am!” shouted Rina, Tino's mother, banging on the bedroom door.

Hearing his mother's screams that sounded like thunder, Tino immediately woke up from his beautiful dream. He immediately rushed to the bathroom to wash his face and brush his teeth. Tino immediately took his bicycle and pedaled toward the traditional market. Every day Tino has to shop for vegetables for their daily meals because his mother has to clean the house and yard.

Tino is the only child of Rina. His father died when Tino was three years old. Since childhood, Tino dreamed of becoming an astronaut, but because his mother was poor and only worked as a clothes washer, Tino could not continue his education to high school. Tino only graduated from junior high school, and his job is only to plow grass for his neighbor's cattle. So, every afternoon, Tino had to go to the meadow on his bicycle to collect long grass.

When Tino was at the traditional market to buy vegetables, a foreign object from the sky flew very fast. It is a space rock. No one realized that the space rock was heading towards the village of Sukatani. When the space rock landed on the earth, the ground in the village shook, like an earthquake measuring 3 on the Richter Scale. Although the earthquake did not cause major damage, it was enough to make all residents shocked and frightened.

At 03.00 pm, Tino sharpens his sickle to get ready to pick grass on a hill in Sukatani village. While sharpening the sickle, Tino's hand accidentally caught a sharp object that he was sharpening. Tino immediately took cooking oil to smear the wound, then bandaged the wound with a cloth. Even though it hurt, Tino didn't cry, let alone scream. Because that kind of wound he often experienced before. Tino is a tough kid in this regard.

When he arrived at the meadow, Tino was surprised to see a crater he had never seen before. He immediately got off his bike and ran into the crater. The crater turned out to be the former landing of the space rock this morning. From the top of the crater Tino saw a small red rock, he was attracted by the red rock and went down to the crater to take the stone. When Tino picked it up, the stone shone brightly. He was very surprised by the magic of the stone. He immediately pocketed the red stone and continued his work as a mower.

While doing his work, Tino saw a weasel trapped by a large fallen tree. Tino couldn't save the weasel, but he tried to lift the big tree trunk and he was even more surprised. The trunk of a large tree seems to have no weight. Tino also threw the rod away with only one hand. Tino hasn't realized that his strength comes from the red stone he keeps in his pocket. Tino was very surprised by the power he had.

When he got home, Tino took a shower and changed his clothes, then went outside for coffee. At the coffee shop, he meets his friend, Anto. "Hey Anto, when I was in the meadow this afternoon, I was able to lift a very large tree trunk alone, you wouldn't believe it," said Tino.

“Impossible, try to prove it. I would believe it if I saw it.” Anton said.

"Look at the big rock on the river bank, I'll lift it with one hand," said Tino arrogantly.

When he tried it, Tino seemed to object and couldn't lift the big rock. “HAHAHA” Anto laughed seeing Tino who was just boasting. Tino was surprised by the disappearance of his power earlier. Then Tino remembered the red rock he found in the crater in the meadow. Then Tino took Anto to his house to get the red stone that was still in his trouser pocket. He told of the stone that glowed when Tino held it. Anto was surprised to see the shining stone when Tino held it. Then Anto assumed that the stone gave strength to Tino. They returned to the river with the red stone.

"Try to keep it in your pocket and try lifting the stone again," said Anto.

Anto was surprised and surprised to see Tino who was able to lift a large stone that was impossible for ordinary people to lift. “How did your strength become that big?” Asked Anton.

"I also don't know, with this stone I can save people from evil," said Tino.

Suddenly there was a scream of a woman being robbed around the two of them. Tino and Anto ran towards the source of the screams. Quickly and swiftly, the three robbers fell immediately after being hit by a blow from Tino. Not only strength, but Tino has lightning-like speed when attacking. Since then, Tino has become a superhero in his village. Rescue people who are victims of criminal crimes. As long as he kept the red stone in his trouser pocket, Tino became a human that could not be defeated.

The end.

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matur sembah suwon sanget mister

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So the meteor didn't destroy. Rather, it came bearing an extraterrestrial gift. Now Tino can save the day wherever he finds himself. Interesting e

yes sis, it is a magic stone from space that is able to give great power to its owner.

I loved your story. The moment I started reading it, I wanted to read more of it. Your story caught my attention and I had fun reading it.

Yeah, I noticed that you had a bit of mistake in referring Tino as “her” in third paragraph. But it's okay. I know you just missed it, and your story is still beautiful @radenkusumo666.

Thanks for the correction my friend. I've edited and fixed it. Thank you, I'm glad you like it.

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thank you sir

A sweet, entertaining story with a magic stone that turns “ordinary” Tino into a superhero. So glad that the power of the stone is used for good, and that the protagonist takes on the criminal world with justice in mind.

Thank you for engaging with other writers in the community.
One suggestion:- check the gender identity of Tino - is the protagonist a girl or a boy?

Thanks for your correction sir. I have edited and fixed it. Tino in this character is boy

I want a rock like that... My gardening would get done way faster! Cool story.

you have to snatch it from Tino 😂😂

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thank you sir