Hello @frosh,
It's good to see you posting here. This story once again holds a reader's interest. It is constructed well. There is a serious issue however, with your spelling, and grammar. You should run your pieces past a good friend who is a skilled grammarian, or you should run them through the Grammarly program. We recommend this program to writers who would benefit from a polish in grammar and spelling. **** A word of caution **** Grammarly offers suggestions about rewording/rephrasing your writing. Do not take these suggestions. If you do, the story will come up as AI contaminated. This happens to many writers who mistake grammar correction for style edits.

We think that if you had your story corrected for grammar/spelling, you would probably get much higher curation rewards.

Looking forward to reading more from you.

The Inkwell Team