@offia66, this story contains a significant number of errors that should have been fixed before posting. There are many sentences that have no period at the end, as well as misspellings, and other errors. If you would like to be curated in The Ink Well in the future, please take the time to review your content prior to posting. We recommend using the free version of Grammarly to check for spelling and grammatical errors. (We do NOT recommend Grammarly for writing or rephrasing.)

Here is an example of some errors in your story:

The line that ends with "My Dad" cuts off after an incomplete sentence. The line that ends with "Mom added" is missing a period at the end. These are just a few examples.