"FOOL FOR LOVE - AN ORIGINAL SONG || BY D4MUSIC @obaro" [ENG-ESP]

obaro in #hive-193816 • 3 years ago

There's this feeling. I can't tell what it is like.
Well, earlier today, I got this inspiration after playing pes on mobile phone.
I had multiple thoughts going through my mind.

I was actually short of songs.
I wanted to ask few of my musical friends like @starstrings01, @ksam, @adrah and so on for songs recommendation.
Boom, this surfaced!!!

This is a kinda emotional song. Am I a fool for love. A question left for you to answer!
Kindly enjoy.!!

LYRICS

It looks more like a trap
Can someone help me out
But
It is complicated

It look more like a trap
Can someone pull me out
I got carried away
By fake promises

You fooled me into
Loving you
You fooled me
You fooled me
(2x)

To loving you
To loving you
You shattered my heart
To loving you
To loving you
You shattered my heart

It took time and I healed
And right now you are here
Trying to get me back
What am I to do

I'm still living in my past
Stuck in my emotions
And now I need help

CHORUS

Am I a fool for for love
Am I a fool for love
Am I a fool for love
Am I a fool for love

Am I a fool for love
Am I a fool for love

Can someone save me
Hmm
Can someone save me

Thanks for tuning in, I really appreciate you!!!

SPANISH

Hay este sentimiento. No puedo decir cómo es.
Bueno, hoy temprano, obtuve esta inspiración después de jugar pes en el teléfono móvil.
Tenía múltiples pensamientos pasando por mi mente.

De hecho, me faltaban canciones.
Quería pedirles recomendaciones de canciones a algunos de mis amigos musicales como @starstrings01, @ksam, @adrah, etc.
¡¡¡Boom, esto salió a la luz!!!

Esta es una canción un poco emotiva. ¿Soy un tonto por amor? ¡Te queda una pregunta por responder!
Amablemente disfrute.!!

LETRA

Parece más una trampa
Alguien me puede ayudar
Pero
Es complicado

Parece más una trampa
alguien me puede sacar
Me dejé llevar
Por falsas promesas

Me engañaste
Amandote
Me engañaste
Me engañaste
(2x)

Para amarte
para amarte
destrozaste mi corazón
para amarte
para amarte
destrozaste mi corazón

Tomó tiempo y me curé
Y ahora mismo estás aquí
tratando de recuperarme
Qué voy a hacer

Todavía estoy viviendo en mi pasado
Atrapado en mis emociones
Y ahora necesito ayuda

CORO

*¿Soy un tonto por amor?
¿Soy un tonto por amor?
¿Soy un tonto por amor?
¿Soy un tonto por amor?

*¿Soy un tonto por amor?
¿Soy un tonto por amor?

¿Puede alguien salvarme?
Mmm
alguien me puede salvar

Gracias por sintonizarnos, realmente los aprecio!!!

▶️ 3Speak

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3 years ago in #hive-193816 by obaro

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eugelys 3 years ago

This song is about heartbreak, I liked some of the melismas that you added, you can feel the message of pain that you want to transmit, I would only recommend you not to have so many repetitions at the end.

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obaro 3 years ago

This song is about heartbreak, I liked some of the melismas that you added, you can feel the message of pain that you want to transmit,

Yes you are right!!
The song is a song of heart break!
And I'm glad you liked it!!🙂

I would only recommend you not to have so many repetitions at the end.

How do you mean by repetition?
Do you mean chorus can't be repeated?
I cleared indicated that side as chorus which is

Am I a fool for love (4x)

I listen to songs very well.. and I'm sure you do too.
Song choruses are repeated well enough two to thrice in a song.

It's only the lyrics that might not be permitted to be repeated!!

Thanks for the observation dear @eugelys !!

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eugelys 2 years ago

I listen to songs very well.. and I'm sure you do too.
Song choruses are repeated well enough two to thrice in a song.

Yes, of course, I listen to songs very well in fact I have been listening to songs in many languages for over 40 years (lol). Your song could have ended at minute 04:09 where you just pause which conveyed that to me, then the chorus starts again for 30 more seconds. These are just suggestions Obaro, my opinion, my contribution :)

Have a nice day!

Sí claro que escucho las canciones muy bien de hecho llevó más de 40 años escuchando canciones en muchos idiomas (lol). Tu canción pudo haber terminado en el minuto 04:09 donde justamente haces una pausa que me transmitió eso, luego empieza el coro nuevamente por 30 segundos más. Son solo sugerencias Obaro, mi opinión, mi aporte :) ¡Ten un bello día!

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obaro 2 years ago

Yes, of course, I listen to songs very well in fact I have been listening to songs in many languages for over 40 years (lol). Your song could have ended at minute 04:09 where you just pause which conveyed that to me, then the chorus starts again for 30 more seconds. These are just suggestions Obaro, my opinion, my contribution :)

You must be a musical genius I must say!!

It's nice having you around visiting my content.
I like what you do dear @eugelys
Thanks for your observation.

Btw, I like how you sing too!!❤️

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eugelys 2 years ago

You must be a musical genius I must say!!

You exaggerate a lot (lol) A musical genius is Mozart, for example, among many others. I was just telling you that I have more than 40 years of listening to songs of all kinds, in several languages, since we are born we all listen to music and we form our musical ear according to what we hear. Then we grow up in our childhood, adolescence, and adulthood we continue in that process. I am very observant of the musical world, not a genius (not at all). If you are in your twenties you have at least 20 years of listening to music, it doesn't make us musical geniuses, just music lovers who listen to music not only with their ears but also with their hearts.

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obaro 2 years ago

You exaggerate a lot (lol) A musical genius is Mozart, for example, among many others. I was just telling you that I have more than 40 years of listening to songs of all kinds, in several languages, since we are born we all listen to music and we form our musical ear according to what we hear. Then we grow up in our childhood, adolescence, and adulthood we continue in that process. I am very observant of the musical world, not a genius (not at all). If you are in your twenties you have at least 20 years of listening to music, it doesn't make us musical geniuses, just music lovers who listen to music not only with their ears but also with their hearts.

This is true.
But I'm not exaggerating about you being a musical genius!! Hahaha 😀
I appreciate great things when I see one.

However, the heart understands music so well. When we connect with our hearts while writing a song, it tends to be great!.

Btw, are you on telegram?
Or discord?

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eugelys 2 years ago

You keep exaggerating (OMG), yes I am on Discord. It would be nice if some of us singer-songwriters could get together to talk about how we create songs. Maybe the language barrier might be a bit of a problem but maybe we can make it happen.

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obaro 2 years ago

Smiles you are funny.

It would be nice if some of us singer-songwriters could get together to talk about how we create songs. Maybe the language barrier might be a bit of a problem but maybe we can make it happen.

It will be nice to make that happen!

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sekani 3 years ago

Refreshing to listen to you as always🔥

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obaro 3 years ago

Thanks a lot dear @sekani
I really appreciate your support always!!!

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naradamoon 3 years ago

Greetings brother! What a beautiful original song, beautiful lyrics. Very touching. It's a pleasure to listen to you with your guitar or beautiful singing. 👏👏😌🎆🎉🎊🍻😊💯✨😎🎵🎼🤘🙏🎶