Distance dissipates on the Island of Boy

in #hive-1992752 years ago

Awhile back I wrote a story about a boy who was left on a deserted island by some sort of goddess named Gelea. You see, he is the bastard son of her husband Favian, whom she has seven daughters with. Afraid that the boy will take away the birthright of her daughters, she erases his memory, and leaves him on the Island. Understandably, the response to this ending was varying degrees of "What the heck Grindan?!" it was pretty sad. It weighed on me, I couldn't leave the lad all alone.

So, here is part two as requested by @treasuree @wrestlingdesires and @samsmith1971! This takes place 5-10 years after the ending of part one, where we are left with boy settling in. Between the provisions Gelea left him, and the remains of a wrecked airplane, he establishes a home. Favian leaves Gelea, believing his son is dead, and she slips into despair. For those who didn't read part one, no worries. You'll do just fine with my above summary :)

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Gelea launches herself into the sky, her guts twisting in a marinade of loathing. She spins to a stop within the clouds, feeling the corrosive nature of her situation crawl up her throat. Her scream is ethereal, terrifying. It is not the sound a woman makes in anguish; it comes on with a flash of lightning. Electricity crackles around her, as the thunder acknowledges her pain, somberly.

Frost giants lob their waste down below, aiming at ships which are thrown about in the tide of a sudden storm. She sees him out there, thousands of miles away... and yet she hears him sing. The bastard. He finds her before bed, whispering to her as she lets her golden red hair down. His fingers reach through the strands of her mane, which betray her in the reminder of what she's done.

She knows he waits in dreams, their meeting unavoidable. It has now been ten years since she set eyes on him, but his image is crystal clear. As if she has washed him, fed him, and loved him all these years... except she's done the opposite. His beautiful eyes pierce her, judgement withheld.



Boy hears the drips that fall from the palms, a brisk storm leaving a pleasant breeze behind. They combine with the sound of his laundry, which hangs from a rough rope, flapping in the wind. He taps his foot, "oh, woah, oh ho, ha ho, yeah yeah, oh..." for someone who does not remember hearing music, his little song is kind of catchy. Gelea hears him, her stomach a knot of writhing snakes.

His eyes become glued to something offshore, which moves closer with each passing wave. Boy squints, titling his head forward. It was rare that anything that large washed up. Wading into the shallows up to his knees, he still couldn't make it out. The mass wiggles, and an arm flaps up briefly, before it sinks below the surface. In the blink of an eye, Boy is halfway there.

From the size of her dress, she had appeared much larger floating in the ocean. Back on the warmth of the sand, she coughed the water from her lungs, heaving the rest from her stomach with her back turned. Once she seemed gathered enough, Boy spoke slowly. "Are you alright? Can I... anything?" Words felt thick on his tongue in his first conversation.

She looks at him with dark dazed eyes, blonde hair clinging to her blue tinged face. With a jolt of guilt, Boy redirects. Helping her to her feet he says, "Let's just get you warm for now." his strong arms guide her gingerly, leaving the waves lapping the sand behind them.

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Gelea shrieks out once more, the clouds surrounding her swell, as streaks of lighting glow in their depths. How had Aoina found him here? After all these years, to see her sister once more... she watched on, sick as anger and apprehension battled within her. The last time she saw Aoina, she had lain a curse on Gelea, insuring she would never have a male child. Why was she here?

In the distance, Boy brings a seemingly ravaged survivor to the home he has made. Built on stilts, the hut appears amongst the palm trees. Its frame is made of narrow lengths of wood, set a few inches apart. Weaved between them are braids of dried reeds. The poles bend to meet at the center of the ceiling, where a hole is left open.

A roughly hammered metal fireplace centers the room, its chimney rises through the opening, carrying the smoke away from the small space. "There are clothes in the trunk, and you can hang your things on the line" Boy says, gesturing to a length of rope across the hut. Blushing, he quickly snatches his underwear from it, and hurries out the door. Peaking just his head back through the frame he says, "Okay I'll be out here!" before shambling back down the hanging ladder.



Mischief ignites in Aoina's eyes, as she finds herself alone in the bastard boy's dwelling. Favian was an absolute dolt, so the kid must've gotten his smarts from his mother, he seemed to be doing well here. Handcrafted tools lined the walls, carved bowls and utensils sat neatly on a shelf of driftwood.

She kicked open the chest, it was full of Hawaiian shirts and khaki pants. Ruffling around, she found a navy jump suit near the bottom. It smelled fine enough, but dark stains marked the front. Shrugging, Aoina chose it anyhow. Magic could dry her clothes, but he didn't need to know that yet.

Once dressed, she descended to find the area around the hut deserted. She decided to pace about, to see what she could learn about the boy. There was a path made through the trees by years of footsteps, she followed along, amazed by the care he had taken in developing his island.

Strange traps hung in the trees, collecting bugs. As she walked along she came to a clearing where it seemed the boy was starting a fruit tree patch. A few young mango and coconut trees supervised the babies Boy was propagating nearby, housed in tin can pots.

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Gelea watches her sister as she floats closer, filled with memories of the stranger who had once been her best friend... had it really been twenty years since they had spoken? Her mind drifts to childhood, when they were inseparable.

Aoina skips ahead of the others through the meadow, her hair bounces along behind her, the color of honey shining in the sun. Somehow, she is never dirty, she is never upset. Her teeth are so straight, so perfectly white. Her words do them justice, a precarious venture. She is loyal and brave.

The others trail close behind her, with Gelea taking up the rear. As Favian catches up to Aoina, she looks back toward Gelea to encourage her forward. Gelea is always in last place, although you'd never know it from the way Aoina cheers as she joins the group at last.

Shaking the nostalgia away violently, Gelea remembers that Aoina ruined her life. She once again goes through the merits of this visit, what does her sister have to gain from appearing here?



I hope you've enjoyed part two of my tale, here is part three! :)


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You really write like a professional, I don't know if you are. I didn't read the previous story but your summary really introduces us very well in this new part.

What's more, this story opens up our appetite for what the outcome will be. The boy does not remember anything? Will Gelea be reunited with the child? What plans does Aoina have? I'll be on the lookout for the next installment 💪🤝😉

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Thank you so much for this incredible comment, you've really made my day! I am not a professional writer, however that is my dream! I started here on hive to get myself writing more, and I'm so glad I did- comments like yours really lift me up and inspire me 💚

It's good that my comment has been positive, you're doing excellently well and Hive is a great school to make a life and grow as writers. ❤️😉

Omg 😱😱, girl you rock and I do agree, what does Aoina want, Boy is so innocent and does not know what awaits him. This is beautiful I can feel the waves, sands, and the sound of nature echoes.

😁❤️ Thank you sis!

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Hopefully this means that Boy's time alone is over permanently! At this stage, he might just wish to stay there, if he has a companion...

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I just wrapped 'er up hehe... anything is possible 😁

Thank you for your comment, and the curation!

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OOh, Grindan!!!💗 What a great follow on to part 1. It is so interesting that the one person who represents pain, heartache, and betrayal to her (being the fruit of her husbnad's affair) is the one she cannot stop thinking about... her own guilt over what she has done to a young boy fights vociferously with her need to remove him from her life. Boy meanwhile remains oblivious to it all, concerned only with survival and finding a way off the island. It seems Gelea has a lot of pain points in her life, all tied up in failed relationships of one sort or another. I look forward to finding out where things went wrong with her sister and why her sister has manufactured this entry onto the island. Bring on tomorrow.

I saw the tag (thank you 😍) and had part 2 set aside to read after Dreemport curation this evening...and then I got assigned your post anyway ;-)

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Dreemport does that to me all the time 😂 I love little coincidences like that!

Gosh, thank you for this awesome comment Sam 😁 Hearing how my stories take shape for others always gives me chills- you know those little fluttery chills you get when you're happy, or is that just a me thing? lol

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Fluttery chills are great! I think I know exactly what you mean 😊 That made me smile reading that 💗 I am so tired tonight that I will have to come to find your part 3 tomorrow !LUV

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Poor Gelea. Her spite is like poison. Bit by bit it is removing love from her life. Everyone, in her mind, is against her. Her husband. Her sister. They are all to blame. And so, the story gets woven and she sits inside it; the storm fed by her rage.

The beauty is that Boy is oblivious to her machinations. This must be the worst part for her. To be unknown, and ignored, by the person she obsesses over, must be hell. But, it is a hell of her own making.

Waiting on Wednesday now. 💛

I always love hearing what spoke to you in my stories 😍! Gosh, what a perfect summary of what Gelea must be feeling... and sweet Boy, ignorant of the forces that have influenced his entire life, the unlucky pivot point of her pain.

Thank you for this awesome comment 😁