Dami's plight || part 1

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The hall was silent, the audience's attention was fixed on the girl performing on the stage. Dami stared as the girl swayed her body to the music, moving in perfect sync with the instrumentalist.

Immediately after the girl's dance, the audience erupted into loud shouts, the whole hall was vibrating. Dami was sure the girl would take the trophy home. And truly as she had thought, the girl was declared the winner.

As Dami approached her mother's house, she called it her mother's house, because after all, she was more or less a tenant. As she got closer, her hands were sweating, her heart was in turmoil and it felt as though she was having a panic attack. The nearer she got to the house the higher her fear threshold rose. She summoned courage, put on a smile that didn't reach her face and opened the door.

"Hi everyone, am home".

Tola raised her head and smile at her
" welcome, mom is in the kitchen".

"Ok, will talk to her later" she hurried into her room, happy that there will be no trouble tonight.

Tola watched with sad eyes as she ran upstairs. She wondered when the issues between their mom and Dami would be resolved.

"Tola, who was that?"

"Dami"

"Ok"

Around 2 am at midnight, there was a loud banging on the door. Tola was so scared that she ran into Dami's room. She was shocked that Dami slept through the loud noise.
"Dami, Wake up. Someone's at the door"

Immediately Dami heard Tola's words, she stood up from the bed, check the time and was confused.

"Who's at the door?"

"I think they are burglars"

They jumped when they heard a noise, and looked up but it was their mom. She signals them to be silent and follow her. She took them into the closet and hid them.

"No matter what happens, you girls must remain hidden. Don't come out. Do you understand me?" She whispered.

The girls nodded. A few minutes after she left, they heard something like an argument and muffs sounds. All of a sudden as though something possess her, Dami told her sister to stay put and left the closet. She trace her mother's voice and came face to face with the burglar and her mother.

When her mother saw her, she looked at her fearfully. But the man was happy to see a young girl, he imagined all that he would do to her.

"Get back inside" her mother screamed

"If you move an inch, I will blow your head off", the man pointed the gun at her.

Suddenly Dami realise the gravity of the matter, she regretted not listening to her mom, now she was going to pay heavily for her mistake. Before she knew what was happening, she heard the word " run" but her feet won't move, suddenly she was pushed and as she tried to run she had a gunshot.

To be continued...

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Oh that was a very scary end to this part of your story, who shot and who was shot? I'm curious to know that... I hope you'll be able to submit the remaining parts before the challenge ends 😊

Your story is well structured, full of suspense and I'm glad I'm one of those who read it 🙂
Waiting for the next part

😄😄😄.. Your excitement got me excited

who shot and who was shot?

You will find out this week...

Your story is well structured,full of suspense and I'm glad I'm one of those who read it

Thank you @merit.ahama, this is my first story, I was so nervous when I published it, seriously, I didn't think it was that great. Thank you for your comment, it just brightens my day

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I didn't think it was that great

Oh stop it! You think this masterpiece isn't that great! I totally disagree 😅

Your story is cool, I love it and I'm waiting for the next part impatientlyyyyyyyyyyyy 😂

You think this masterpiece isn't that great! I totally disagree

Oh, thank you for thinking it is a masterpiece😍😍😍

I'm waiting for the next part impatientlyyyyyyyyyyyy 😂

I have been quite reluctant in writing the second part, but I will start right on it now.

Please do, we are waiting 😁

Well you have me wondering who is alive and who isn't for next week :D

GREAT story!!

Thank you @snook.. Am sure you will know that on Friday.

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Wow... I hope the family survives this encounter 😲

Well done, I am hooked :)

Dami made a really wrong choice, she should have just obeyed her mother's words but I guess that is what was bound to happen anyways.

I wonder who was shot 😬.

Dami made a really wrong choice, she should have just obeyed her mother's words but I guess that is what was bound to happen anyway

You are right. She should have listen to her mother.

I wonder who was shot 😬.

You can check out part 2 and check if you guessed right

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Yes, I will check out the other part soon 🥰, thank you for sharing it with me here.

It is an experience that is not at all pleasant to live in person. At least we are sure it is a fictional story, but having been through similar situations does not allow me to think calmly. We will see the outcome of the story. Excellent dreamer, great story.

So sorry for the memories the story brought up. And yes you are right it is just a fictio story. I hope you are ok?

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I never expected the ending of this!!! (at least of the first part) -you led us right in with the dance, and then the friction between the mom and daughter, and I was expecting something of a family drama...

but to then jump right into the fray with the suspense of the burglary! wow!!! it turned so intense quickly!!!

Now we have to wait until next week to know who was shot... what will happen between mother and daughter - and possibly the other sister??

really great plot here! fast moving and exciting! Hoping that this tragedy brings them closer together !!! Thanks for entering DreemPort!! :)

Am happy to enter dreemport and participate in the dreemportchallenge.

I never expected the ending of this!

Even I didn't know it was going to have such a ending when I started writing

I was expecting something of a family drama...

I was going write something along the line of a family drama but I guess the plot change as I started writing.

I love the challenge, it made me discover a part of me that I didn't knew exists!! And to think I had thought I would never be able to write anything or even participate in the challenge.

Thank you for your comment @dreemsteem, it as encourage me so much, that I will start writing the part 2.