You Can't Hurry Time - Part 2

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Part 2 of the 3 Part Fiction Series Scholar&Scribe / DreemPort Challenge
 
You can read Part 1 here

 

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Jack Summer had lived in the village near the house at the edge of the cliff since he'd been born on a cold bedroom floor at home.

He'd entered into this world early by seven days. And even then quick enough for his mother to not reach the nearby bed, from the warm bath she'd lain in, for his birth.

A child more full of wonder and curiosity had yet to be met in the once restful village. Jack's laughter could frequently be heard ringing heartily throughout the town from as far as the hills and cliffs, as he adventured through the landscape and lost himself in the magic of nature and his own imagination.

The weather had little effect on his travels. Jack could be found wandering outdoors in sunshine or rain, oblivious to the temperature or moods of his surroundings. Always seeking. Always moving forward.

Ever warm with the anticipation of discovery. Ever cool with the confidence of finding his way home.

 

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Jack's exploration of the local territory had widened every year of his life.

To the point that, by the time Sally Jansen quietly appeared in the distance at the house near the edge of the cliff, Jack would be away from his home for many seasons at a time.

But to his home he would always return.

Jack the man, like Jack the boy, had only ever been able to live according to his own true nature and follow his own heart's true desire.

The folk in the town had long since stopped inviting him to events, social occasions or town hall meetings. And gifts from unmarried young women, of home made breads and bakes, had dried up even a while back before then.

Jack's name was hardly mentioned and neither his absence nor his presence caused much of a stir any longer. The folk of the small village had grown to accept his coming and going without bitterness or celebration at his departure or arrival.

Perhaps when life is more simple, people and their ways are able to remain so more easily as well.

Four long summers and three longer winters passed before Jack Summer returned from his travels, to his home in the village, near the house at the edge of the cliff.

And when he returned, Sally Jansen did not even know it.

 

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Sally Jansen had no idea that Jack was back in the village because since he'd seen Sally Jansen walking in solitude to the edge of the cliff one day, later in the afternoon than was warm enough to be comfortable and just before the shadows after sunset made it difficult to find a way back, Jack had begun, for the first time in his life...

...to sit and wait silently and unknowingly himself.

But Jack didn't even realise he was quietly waiting at all.

He'd been wandering along the shoreline late one afternoon, considering a swim off the old jetty, when he first saw Sally Jansen looking down from the cliff near the house at the edge of the world.

Jack was the only person in the village who still used the jetty to dive off and swim in the wide open waters it led to. Nobody knew where the legend had originated from or when it began, but the beach was believed to be haunted.

When belief replaces seeking, things become the way things are. A slow transition from possibility to unquestionable fact that sometimes makes us forget to question things anymore at all.

But there was once, long ago, the whisper of a man who was lost to the sea bordering the secluded white beach. A man unjustly accused, and sentenced for life, for a crime he had never committed.

A man who had leapt from a passing by prison ferry, to swim to a desperate reclaiming of freedom.

 

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Jack Summer only had to see Sally Jansen looking down, silent and unseeing, from the edge of the cliff once, to be lulled into quiet waiting himself.

And Jack Summer walked to the same shadows, beneath the cliff with the endless horizon, every day on from that moment forward...

to sit and wait silently for Sally Jansen to look down, one more time.

 
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So I did it again and somehow posted this before it was ready and even onto the wrong community! I have no idea how that happened.
 
Deleted and redone here, but if you find something floating around please do let me know *rolling eye emoji and imagine being a bot??

Thanks for your reading time if you made it this far! 😅❤️
 


 


 

I talked too much again this week and may have visited more folks on this card...but I suck at admin, right?

Also... I'm visiting the rest of you on the card this weekend.

You've been duly warned 😄

 

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gahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

oh my gosh - are you kidding me hehehehehe

this is one of those stories... hehehehe the ones that grab my heart and don't let go.

Look up Sally!!! Open your eyes and see him there!!!!!

and this..

When belief replaces seeking, things become the way things are. A slow transition from possibility to unquestionable fact that sometimes makes us forget to question things anymore at all.

well isn't that just a gorgeous passage... just sitting there waiting for me to slather jam all over it and gobble it up!hehehehehe

beautiful and i simply can't wait for next week and part 3!!!!!!

What a delicious comment!

Ivage all the jam thank heavens! Not buying anymore!

My belly will thank me later

😂😅

i made a raspberry sauce that was kinda like jam.... with allulose.

I'll stick with that LOLOLOL

Nice!

I must get back on the low sugar wagon

Let's share solutions like this 👍☝️

I’m enjoying your story! You keep us guessing, providing hints along the way.

Thanks Sunbeam :)

I love your handle 🌻

And thanks for taking the time to read and say hello!

See you soon 😁

Thanks 😊 My maiden surname was Beam and sunbeam is a nickname that has stuck with me.

I appreciate making new connections here on Hive!

So cute :)

Me too. Nice to "meet" you Sunbeam <3

I visited you before you visited me 😅😁

Wonderful story line.... let's see what the fin part holds

I always get there eventually!

I should kept my mouth shut and surprised you but I do chat too much sometimes 😅

See you soon!

And thanks for saying hello 👋

And the interest intensifies!!

I can not wait to see what happens next week Now that we have two men and a women involved :D

😂😅

Well... um... the pressure's on then. Tnx Snook! ❤️

And thanks for the points :) I'll pay them forward with joy!

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Thank you Sam 😊

Been in some process here so a bit quiet but you're on my reading list always so coming soon ❤️

A while since I read something as stirring as this. Those two have much more in common for two people that have hardly met. What Sally waits for forever. Just maybe he may be the one to change everything.

I guess we will have to see...

Time will tell! I 😉

To think that Jack the explorer will be waiting for love though unknowingly was far from my imagination.

I really wish Jack and Sally would hook up at the end❤❤❤ but I can't do anything except wait for the next episode...Lolz😀😀😀

Well ...

I have an ending but I'm not revealing it today

Thanks for reading and your beautifully encouraging comment

It inspires me to write even though I've been procrastinating madly! 😊❤️

Hahaha
Plz procrastinate no more 😀

Darn

I was busy procrastinating and then you reminded me 😁

Two peas in a pod, I hope Sally is not a siren and Jack on his way to doom...

It was kinda exactly almost that and then I got distracted and forgot where I was going

Sally was going to be the ghost. Plot twist.

How did you know???

Well just a hunch, I like to twist a plot. I will leave part 3 until I have finished all the other part 2's I did not get too!

I have a ton of reading to catch up on as well!

On we go

Tally ho!

Yeah me too, the reading pile grows and grows!

In my pajamas going through the creativity and having a blast! 😁

Really enjoy this community and the beautiful quirkiness of all the imaginings

It's certainly always heartwarming and surprising both

Fluff Netflix. No surprises there at all anymore.

Good baking though 👍 The desserts aren't half bad there either

haha fluff netflix! Yea I fluffed them too!

There is certainly an overload of quirkiness that is for sure:

Or maybe just a bit more honesty ;)

Whatever it is sticking around

You may need my birchometer and I never let a team mate down 👍

When belief replaces seeking, things become the way things are. A slow transition from possibility to unquestionable fact that sometimes makes us forget to question things anymore at all.
I found you, and I am super glad I did, glued to the end, intrigued by the text above 👆
I see you and now I understand how you got to see me 🥺
Keep writing captain( in ur own voice) 🤗

Let's hope she looks down. Hopefully she sees him. Always the love of our life is one step away, but we don't look. You definitely surprised me with the second part! I was expecting Sally to be a witch or something. 🤣 This is so much better. It's not like most romance novels smooshy 😀...I imagine her falling and he catching her in his arms. My heart is pounding... for what we have yet to see in part 3 ♥️♥️♥️

#dreemport

Ah - you're a romantic at heart as well! ☺️

Glad I surprised you a bit!

Love is mostly about good timing, I've found personally. Weird that it is that... but it seems to be mostly about good timing!

Maybe. Sometimes it's just destiny. Glad you found your soulmate, it's rare.
Why do people keep calling me, romantic 🤣🤣
The only romance I have is with food and candies. Give me chocolate and I'm yours for life. 🤣
I think I turned your posts, into a chat room - keep up the good work and I very glad you are a dreemer 😀

#dreemport

Oh

I just chat too much

I'm a dreamer right? 😂

My only soul mates right now are chocolate and video games

Me too. 😂 Wayy to much!

Are you not in Dreemport?
My type of girl 🤣🤣 As long as you don't eat my chocolate

I'm on Dreemport.

My writing can be quite sweary so I only submit the less cheeky stuff PG-13 :)

I will totally eat your chocolate! Of course!

My soul mates are currently chocolate (snap!), hot showers, hive, fortnite and an unbroken sleep 🙃😅

Now I really want to get to know.
It sounded, better in my mind. 🤣🤣

Most things do sound better in thought!

oh, gosh... spellbound... I'm watching this man.... watching this woman.... (potentially) watching this man... it's all so heartbreakingly intense... it feels like one of those films where you are willing two people together who just cannot seem to get their timing right throughout life. And like everyone else.... that line... eish Nicky...

When belief replaces seeking...

You write beautifully. You connect deeply. I love it! And cannot wait for part 3💗

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Yeay.

Thank you @darthsauron ☺️🌺

I was away, came back and met some new people and had more votes on the post and that was your work here, my friend. ☀️

No problem. Call it, motivation to keep publishing, quality post and such a romantic stories. 😀♥️

And so I will 😁👍

Mama mia!!! Never disappointed!!! I love where this is going and the kind of sensation it takes as I read on... So wonderfully written! I can't wait till Friday!!!

Yo! Love your feedback, sister!!! 😁

Now inspired because enthusiasm is contagious. Thanks for taking the time to read and comment 💥

It was a pleasure😉

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When belief replaces seeking, things become the way things are. A slow transition from possibility to unquestionable fact that sometimes makes us forget to question things anymore at all.

This ☝️

It took me 50 or so years to get my head around this, and now, I seem to see its reminders everywhere.

There is a tumultuous quietness to your story that has unfathomable depths. Imagining Sally looking out and over the horizon from her high-up vantage point and Jack looking up from his, just takes my breath away. Even though, I can't explain why.

Art, I guess, is the answer. Soul art.

What a gorgeous comment!

You took my breath away with that one. I had to read it twice...

Thank you ❤️🙏

Well, that makes the two of us breathless. Lol!

I'm loving this challenge so much, and how lovely is it, that you are also on my Bingo card? I'd have come by any way but it's grand that you were on it. 💛

Ditto :)

Exactly ditto ❤️

Beautifully written and so mysterious. Can’t wait for more. Lovely 😊

Thank you 😊

I'll try not to disappoint but hey... life works in mysterious ways so

.....

Let's see what happens next.

I got to see the warning now ha ha after the deed is done. Nice piece you got here. How has the writing been.

Oh hello new friend :) This is why I love the challenges. We get to meet new people on here.

I've really enjoyed writing this one... It's been quite cathartic in many ways. But I think that's why we write, huh?

Yeah ... I like to Warner brother. But I'm harmless. Really :)

Unless people or animals are being hurt. Then I'm a warrior. 💪

When belief replaces seeking, things become the way things are. A slow transition from possibility to unquestionable fact that sometimes makes us forget to question things anymore at all.
I found you, and I am super glad I did, glued to the end, intrigued by the text above 👆
I see you and now I understand how you got to see me 🥺
Keep writing captain( in ur own voice) 🤗

What a lovely comment.

Thank you so much!

Now I'm intrigued to find out more about you!

I will try! I have different voices for different stories

Yet to really find my own I think ... working on it 👍

Awww ☺️ thank you and you are welcome 🤗
You are doing great already and you will continue to do just fine
I am new here so there isn’t much to find out about me , but I hope you enjoy the voyage through my profile and posts ☺️

Hah

I read your intro :)

I think I'm going to like it here

That’s nice ☺️
Ya always welcome

Hi @nickydee 😁 you have a great sense of humor lol. I can't wait to read the last part of this story. Will love arise between Jack and Sally? Does that wrongfully accused man have any relationship with Sally?

So I did it again and somehow posted this before it was ready and even onto the wrong community! I have no idea how that happened.

That also happens to me sometimes, so it's possible that it happens to others too, so we're not alone in this 😎😉

Glad I'm not alone 😁

And thanks. We gotta keep a sense of humor or all is lost!

Thanks for coming to day hi

Loving how the bingo is connecting me with so many cool new people here!

Genius @dreemsteem

!! 🥰

ps. I also found a new sweet recipe... yeah!

What a pretty friend @nickydee. You are definitely absolutely right @dreemsteem it is spectacularly great 😎😉😘

That makes a nice photo a lot easier 🤩

Aw... thanks 😊

Not so pretty anymore. It's a decent photo taken by someone I adore so she made it easy to look smiley

Reading till the very end of the story...woah you got me glued and mopping with my heads moving in a horizontal motion rofl 😂 😂 😂 😂 😂 like a lecturer reading to get a glimpse of what to teach her students.

Interesting story and I love the end part...hehe...you don't talk too much....you are a a good narrator and you did justice with this one...anticipating the next!

What an awesome comment!

Thank you 😁🙏👍

Hope I don't disappoint!!

I don't ever think you would hehe 😅😅

Well... I certainly try to!

Even though I know I can't!