Definitely a good job on the hair! I love particle hair, but tell you what I really hate combing it XD hoping the new hair system will be better (it looks like a soon thing, I'm hoping it will drop really soon! But meanwhile I'm plodding along and will just rework hair on my characters if I need to I mean I've already done that much reworking why not -_-).
How intense is your mesh? O_O Granted I'm not really sure what I'm doing but I could never get vertex colours to look nice.
I think she needs slightly bigger arms and perhaps to be set forward or backward slightly more as the way she's coiled up on herself at the moment doesn't look very comfortable XD
Not bad at all :D