At the club

in #hive-1611552 days ago

The satin dress was like a mild breeze on her skin. The music, played by suave locals with a bluish white complexion, flowed like water. She felt buried in moist soil that was vibrating with the motion of little earthen creatures, by her intoxication. She had kicked off her shoes and the green marble of the floor could be felt hard and cold against the soles of her feet.

The waiters were like enormous birds. They moved slowly and with grace and arrogance. The hand she held up to attract one of them was burning from the hot food she had ordered and been eating with her fingers. She could still taste the burning sauce on her tongue and on her red fingertips.

She felt a bit dizzy.

The music was suddenly extra intense flowing, flowing in foreign scales. Her feet froze to the ground. She felt the satin strangle her. A shrieking sound filled her head. Her body convulsed. The rhythm of the drums made her lift from the ground. She felt sick and blissful at the same time. Flames shot from her fingertips. She was breathing fire, igniting the paper ornaments in the ceiling.

Then it stopped. The breeze of the satin, and the water of the music, and the soil of the wine, and the cold of the marble, and the warmth of the food - was back.

And the waiter was right next to her. "Can I help you, madam?"


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The breeze of the satin, and the water of the music, and the soil of the wine, and the cold of the marble, and the warmth of the food - was back.

This part was so beautiful to read. Great use of metaphors, my dear guy 🤝.

The art certainly looks like intercourse, but after reading the write up I'm wondering if it was a coincidence 😅

Haha, yes. For the artwork I just choose the one that might be the least strange, definitely intercourse, definitely unrelated. Happy to hear from you. I am still in the middle of restructuring. But at least I am now writing grant applications and getting back into some of the projects.

I've heard this phenomenon called "dissolving borders." Very cool story! I was up there on the ceiling igniting paper myself.

Thanks, I am glad you found it cool. To be honest I just write, then I set my perfectionist editor free, and lastly just press publish. Rather liberating to let the mind run free.

I love to freewrite, but I haven't been able to do it for a while now. I start thinking, and the story goes very stale.

Yes, sometimes it flows sometimes it just don't