Kneel for the King (Erotica | Mature Content)

nickydee in #hive-161155 • 11 months ago

Not sure I'm going to post this one
because it brings to mind a night with my lover

My King

I took him into my mouth as deeply as I could
Down on my knees for him

I took him as far back into my throat as I could
His hands on either side of my head as he groaned

And whispered my name

I took him so far back
that I began to choke and he brought tears to my eyes

So far back that I forgot the moment
and drifted away

Away
Away

He grabbed my hair and pulled my head back

Gently

And I sat there
On my knees before him
My head still tilted back

My eyes closed in ecstasy as he whispered,
"Where did you go?"

I couldn't say

I only smiled and ran my hands up the inside of his thighs as I leaned back into him

Forward
Towards him as he tried to resist

But could not

Nice girls aren't supposed to like this kind of thing, so perhaps I won't post this post today.

But when I saw this prompt, this is the moment that came clearly to mind.

A moment. Our moment. One of many. One I'll return to. Again. And again.

And perhaps not anymore one day.

I think it may be time to forget.

But My King

Who'd have thought a free woman would call a free man
Such a thing.

It makes sense now. It doesn't make me feel less free.
This is the interesting thing about falling on your knees

But you'd have to try it to see
how sweet the surrender can be

In the hands of a King

It's the one who's on their knees
Who really has all the power

The one who's able to surrender
Who really has all the power

Especially in a world full
Of so many rigid conditions

This is my new addiction and freewrite for @mariannewest's Freewrite Writing Prompt Day 2285: kneel for the king

Eternal Seeker
Hardened Dreamer
Mother
Peaceful Warrior
Determined Dancer
and Stargazer

still...

Beyond fear is freedom

And there is nothing to be afraid of.

_{To Life, with Love... and always for Truth!
Nicky Dee}

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11 months ago in #hive-161155 by nickydee

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owasco 11 months ago

It's the one who's on their knees
Who really has all the power

The one who's able to surrender
Who really has all the power

Especially in a world full
Of so many rigid conditions

It's not that I am unappreciative of your erotica (which is very good!), but I love where you ended up on this! The best kind of freewrite there is - insightful, very.

Two very different blowjobs, our stories, with related sentiment.

Is the victim/masochist/subject not just as responsible as the abuser/sadist/ruler? The power is ours.

Excellent freewrite!

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nickydee 11 months ago

Haw!

Thank you 🌺 I learned from a master ;) Not writer but a someone who was into that kind of thing. When he first expressed this thinking, I was a bit skeptical. But then I did some research (of course) and so it is. And an interesting dynamic it is indeed... very powerful, really. Very intimate as well.

The "submissive" actually controls how far things go in the sexual play. Which is the contradiction and misunderstanding, generally. Also... many victims of sexual violence head down this road. It's a way to try and regain power in the situation unconsciously. A way of healing, unconsciously. Isn't that interesting?

But to be done with someone who knows what they're doing! Or I imagine it could make things far, far worse.

I must add that it did help me find my sexuality enormously! After being squished into "nice girls don't like this or do that" for an almost lifetime!

Anyhow...

I meant it in the universal Surrender. Yes. 😊

And thank you <3

Yours too. I love your feistiness and fire!

It takes an enormous amount of intelligence to get me to kneel willingly, you know! Or anybody, I would imagine. It's an art, really.

I do enjoy our conversation already :)

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owasco 11 months ago

I kneel too easily. In bed and out. those days are over.

But I do know the blow job trance, lucky me.

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nickydee 11 months ago

😆

Oh. Same here. About bowing down to bullshit.

Over that now.

Good sexy times with gentle, smart men?

Over it now...

I hope not!

We still got time 😎

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honeydue 11 months ago

Nice girls aren't supposed to like this kind of thing

Why? Says who? I mean, I get this is falling into a playful naughty girl vibe, which is cool. You need that stimulant, esp in erotica. But on a more daylight level, seems to me that sorta mentality is keeping truckloads of girls still harnessed and ashamed. I mean, it's all cool if one can rock into her "naughty girl" vibe like that and roll with it, but many girls get hella embarrassed and ashamed for not being "nice girls".
Anyway, I know you know. Just brought on thoughts.