LIFE'S FEELINGS.

in #hive-1745782 years ago

Yoooo it's Tuesday and this is just something that has been tugging on my mind for long and I just dropped it the way it is.
Life with it's uncertainties and all
With its unending struggles was what put me to this and I know it's a mutual feeling so you can just add your lines in the comments section 😉

Now let's goooo🤞

The morning before the afternoon
The afternoon before the evening
The evening before the night
The night before the dawn

Seasons and times
Time and chance
Burdens and care
Tears that tell of woes

The uncertainties and inevitabilities
The Pressure and the pleasures
The wins and the losses
The truths and the lies

The sweet sensation of love
The Friends and Foes
The tale bearers and the silent
The hustles and the deserted times

The opportunities and depravities
The incomplete unsatisfactory feeling
The good times and the bad times
The sweet enjoyable moments

Add your own lines of Life feelings✨

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