A Terrifying Mansion on Halloween

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The Mansion

It all started one night in 1973, I was in my car, I was going to my grandparents' house, which was my inheritance, many of my relatives said it was haunted, but I did not believe in these things. When I entered for the first time I heard footsteps at the top, but I thought that most likely they were rats, the night came, and I went to sleep without worrying, in the early morning I had to go to urinate in the gloom, that place was quite gloomy, as I went down the stairs little by little the wood creaked as if they were going to fall, but I went down them quietly, when I approached the bathroom there was a shadow in front of me, I lit it with the flashlight, and it was a mountain of clothes that looked like a person, while I was returning to my room I heard footsteps and laughter of a girl, but I ignored it thinking it was my mind playing a joke on me.

The next day I must admit something, the first night gave me a scare, but it was all in my mind, and then I said to myself -I am hungry, go buy bread with coffee- while I was getting dressed, I saw out of the corner of my eye in the mirror a woman with no face, totally pale with an antique dress from the 1800s, at that moment I fell on the floor I rubbed my eyes and there was nothing there, then I ran out of the house and got in my car, I drove as fast as I could to the store, after arriving I bought a 2 kilos bag of coffee and bread, I went back to the house I turned on the TV and while watching I slowly fell asleep.

I felt like I was drowning, when I opened my eyes there was a figure with her face all burned, but I woke up suddenly and thought it was a dream, so I decided to prepare coffee when the ghost of the girl appeared to me, that made me spill some coffee, and it went away quickly as if it was made of smoke, That made me analyze if coffee will have an effect similar to salt, then I went to sleep and the next day I went out to buy a big bag of coffee, even though the house was my inheritance, I had to take care of it for a week and I only had 3 days left to leave here and never come back, again I went to prepare a cup of coffee.


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I waited for the first ghost to appear for several hours until it appeared, and I threw the coffee and scared it away, making me verify that my idea worked almost perfectly, the ghosts disappear at the moment, but I made them more and more angry, and I don't know how long the coffee could last as a weapon, A day passed after that event and while exploring I found some old pictures showing the little girl, the burned man which in this case was a photo worn out by time and the faceless woman, although disturbingly someone had cut her face out of the image. That day was quiet, nothing had happened, my phone started to ring, it was a friend from school - hello Henry how are you - there was no answer, I started to get scared until a strange noise was heard, and I hung up the phone.

That day I felt like someone was following me around the house, but every time I turned around there is no one there, until at night I went to the living room and in a moment I felt a strange sensation, I tried to look for my protection coffee, but it was gone, when I turned around I saw the family materialized in front of me, suddenly the man started to talk and said -join us- the girl following -everything will be easier here- I just felt terrified, when I went running to the kitchen, they appeared in front of me, and he repeated the horrendous words, suddenly a rope grabbed my neck without warning, it was the mother I called the faceless woman who caught me by the back and pulled the rope up to the fan, I kicked trying to save myself until my body could not resist anymore, and I could only see myself lifeless, trapped for eternity in this house of terror like an echo.

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A gruesome end. It's a shame that he ran out of protective coffee.

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Hello dear friend, late, but sure my answer, sorry for the delay I just finished my school homework, yes a very horror filled ending for the theme XD, we need many more liters of protective coffee.

Wao! What a great story...I really liked the development.

Hi thank you so much for stopping by to read my story, I'm glad you liked it, right now at my school they are reinforcing literature and creative writing and I'm having a lot of fun in the process.

With an inheritance like this, it is better not to receive anything hahaha

Holaaaa, hahaha literally for them to give you a house that you will never leave it is better that it stays empty forever, that house is like when they say that people inherit are diseases, so is the house.

A ghost protection coffee. How salt for witches, a very imaginative way to fight evil and evil spirits.

Hi, I was pleased to place coffee as protection against bad things, although in the story I didn't imagine that there was enough coffee and that's why it was the sad ending XD, I love it, Halloween theme is my favorite, thanks for reading my story.

I don't think I could last even an hour in a house like that, imagine having to endure three days and even more if it's protecting yourself with a cup of coffee. It's awful in every way.

Out ghost. : *)

Hi good to see you here, the truth is I don't think many do XD, I would literally bathe in coffee, sounds like a pretty scary house, so much so that its ghostly occupants won't let anyone who enters it out.

Hello dear friend @eollarvesm, let me tell you that this man was very brave to hear and see everything you describe in your story and not run away from the first day, sometimes our disbelief is an opposite action that takes its toll on us and there you describe the sad end of Henry.

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Hi friend, you are right very brave, I think I would not even have gone XD, literally many people are incredulous and therefore do things without thinking like Henry, the sad thing is that he did not live to tell the tale.

Those were some scary scenarios @eollarvesm that made me want to hold on to my coffee cup and never let go:)

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Hello dear friend, I'm sorry for the late reply, I just finished my school homework, thank you for reading my publication, I love the Halloween theme and I really enjoyed this theme that you chose, you are geniuses, I love the contests that you make to make our imagination run wild, this time I could not make my own drawings as I like, but I had little time, even so I did not want to pass the opportunity to participate.

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Haa we invited same person huh?😁
woah such a tragic story with an unhappy ending...so he actually provoked those ghost and then they came more in pack to haunt him . The coffee was no longer available because the ghosts made it disappear or that he had exhausted it.??
This is a nice story by the way, I was hoping he would get out of the house after he must have been done with whatever he was doing there .

Hello if she is a good hivers very active on the platform, that's why I invited her to encourage her to participate, so it is a story not with a happy ending loaded with a lot of terror, I love the theme of Halloween, I really enjoyed writing my story, I answer a little late because I just finished my schoolwork.

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