A Soul Touching Entry In Hive Open Mic Week 232

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Hello to my #hiveopnemic community. Week 232 of hive open mic music contest has been started. The theme of the week is " The taste of Betrayal". Today I am going to participate with a Melodious song. I hope you will enjoy the song.

The lyrics of the song are as under:

Aaj janey ki zid na kro
Younhi pehlu main bethey raho
Aj janey ki zid na kro

Haye mar jaen ge
Ham to mit jain ge
Aesi baatain kya na kro

Tum hi socho zara kyun na rokain tumhain
Jaan jati he jab uth key jatey ho tum
Jan jati hey jab uth key jatey ho tum
Tum ko apni qasam jane jaan
Baat itni meri maan lo
Aj janey ki zid na kro

Waqt ki qaid main zindagi he magar
Chand gharian yahi hain jo azaad hain
Inko kho kar meri jane jaan
Umar bhar na trastey raho

Aaj janey ki zid na kro
Yonhi pehlu main bethey raho
Aaj janey ki zid na kro

Here's a translation of the Urdu poem:

Don't insist on leaving today,
Just sit beside me, stay.
Don't insist on leaving today,
I'll die if you go, I'll fade away.

Why say such things, don't you know?
Think for a moment, why not hold you back?
My life departs when you get up to leave.
My life departs when you get up to leave.

I swear on my life, listen to me,
Life is captive to time, but these moments are free.
Don't waste them, my love, don't go.
I'll spend my life longing for you, don't insist on leaving.

Stay beside me, don't leave today,
Don't insist on leaving, I beg of you, stay.

This wonderful urdu ghazal originally sung by Pakistani singer Farida khanam.
Her voice was hear touching. I tried to copy her way of singing. I hope you will enjoy this song. I sang a Pakistani urdu cover song. This song related the theme of this week.

The lyrics of the song written in urdu and translated into English using Meta AI whatsapp.

Here is the link of original song.


Thank you so much for stopping. Have a great weekend.


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Listening you after long time. Your voice is still charming and also you have right choice.

Thanks for your compliment dear friend

Wow bro your voice is really heart touching. I love your live performances which you upload in various competitions. Wish you all the best

Thanks a lot for your compliment dear friend

You did really a good job nice presentation I enjoyed listening to you

Thank you so much for stopping dear friend

Your song is very good. I like your song very much. Best wishes for you.

Thank you so much for stopping dear bro

Thank you very much for giving us this sentimental song, with it you have highlighted this week's theme of betrayal. You need more attitude brother, you have to enjoy music to transmit it, you have done a good job, but the ideal is excellence, as I mentioned last time, it would be great to advance in the creation of musical content, surprise us with something new, like a music track or be more expressive. Please take it into account and you will see good results. Thanks for being here 😉

Yes dear bro I agree with you.
Next performance would be a better one.
Thank you so much for your guidance.