Revelation At The Caspian Sea [Fiction]

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If only there was another word strong enough to convey Minah's shock and dread at the sight of Emerald as he waddled deep into the sea, his heavily muscled body almost submerged in it.

He slowly turned to stare at her, his gleaming jade-green eyes brilliant against his olive skin. His hands gently stroked the water as he smiled hesitantly. Right before her eyes, tiny pale scales began to cover his skin as his eyes sparkled brighter. The tip of his ears grew pointy.

Fear beat a staccato pulse in her throat as her chest rose and fell. The sight before her was unexpected. Minah struggled to breathe in enough air to clear the haze before her eyes. Hairs rose on the back of her neck and hands, her mouth dry and parted in shock at the brilliant, extraordinary sight.

She regarded Emerald's emerging form with a clinical fascination. Although he was chiselled and contoured beyond human standards of beauty, it was foreign to her.

"You are afraid. I can smell your fear," he said gently, displaying tips of what she was sure were fangs protruding from both sides of his mouth.

"I-I…" Minah was tongue-tied. She glanced around her. The soft column of her throat moved as she swallowed, anything to distract her from showing fear before this man who she loved. There was not another human being in sight. Only her and Emerald.

"I wasn't expecting this…you are…" she stuttered.

"Different?"

Minah nodded, and her eyes widened as they caught the skin under his arms stretching out like translucent fins. The realization of the scene before her unfurled with layer upon layer of horror as she realized curiosity and revulsion warred within her, against her love for him.

Crystal clear, water washed up gently to shore, wetting her feet and leaving tiny bubbles of seafoam before receding into the sea. Her thoughts strayed back to past scenes that should have alerted her to Emerald's difference.

In college, he was seen among the most popular boys on campus. His friends looked up to him for directions. Even the lecturers were careful around him. The heads of departments sometimes consulted him on curriculum matters.

Leadership was a role that sat suitably on his broad shoulders; he never shied away from responsibilities. There was this aura of brilliance around Emerald; everyone wanted to be his friend, the ladies more forward and eager for his attention.

He headed most groups and associations in college. Every word or statement from him was always strongly worded, striking with powerful effect, almost hypnotic —everyone did exactly what he said.

Minah was the complete opposite. She'd rather hide in the crowd, away from attention of any kind until Emerald found her at her first frat party, no thanks to her chattering friends.

His enigmatic eyes told her he was oddly different from the men she knew. He also remarked often that her generous heart drew him to her.

His promise to reveal a big secret about his origin, his true self, brought them both to the Caspian sea. He made her swear an oath not to panic or run away.

Faced with his true nature, an amphibious being, everything made sense to Minah in that instant. She locked her trembling hands together to hide her fear. Her mind admired this novel creature she'd fallen in love with, standing in all his glory, intriguing the logical part of her mind. But her heart? Sadness crept in where love once blossomed.

A certain warm calm enveloped her as she sat smack down on the wet sand, more water lapping at her feet.

Emerald swam back to her and stepped out of the water to sit beside her, his hands stretched out on his raised knees. She turned to look at him. He held her gaze, his eyes nearly black, intense with raw emotion. Her heart lurched, not in fear but in pain and remorse.

"You swore," he whispered harshly, his jaw tightly clenched.

Tears streaked down Minah's face. "What will you do to me?"

Emerald bowed, his jaw hitting his chest. He sighed. "I will never hurt you if that's what you mean. You'll simply forget…me," he answered sadly.

"Oh, Emerald. I wish I was stronger…", she started to say but he shook his head.

"Maybe in another lifetime but I'll always love you, Minah."

Minah gasped awake and sat up straight in her bed. She slapped her hand on her chest, a feeling of intense loss echoed in her heart as tears fell from her eyes.

Much as she tried, she had no recollection of the loss. Only a nagging headache.

The following morning, while walking to her philosophy class with her hardcover books clutched to her chest, her shoulders brushed that of a tall, muscled student. She turned to apologize and looked right into a set of jade-green beautiful but sad eyes.

The owner smiled, inclined his head slightly and walked on. Minah felt the familiar loss again, her hand on her chest as she walked to her class.

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I hope you enjoyed reading this short piece. This is my response to The Ink Well Prompt #78 — brilliant.

Many thanks to @dreemsteem for going over this story with a fine-toothed comb. 💖

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I think meeting him in school the next day was her second chance to hold on to that love, her mind can't be wiped out totally no matter what. She'd always remember that jade-green beautiful eyes. What a beautiful romantic but sad story.

I think meeting him in school the next day was her second chance to hold on to that love,

You may be right! But will she be strong enough to love him for who he is? Hehe. Thanks for reading. !PIZZA 🙂

There's a next chapter right?

short but creative, nice story

Was it only a dream? Irreconcilable differences, as far as Minah is concerned. Star-crossed lovers who come from different worlds. While I like the fantasy of falling in love with a sexy amphibian, I don't think I'd go through with it myself. Too fishy. 😆

Too fishy? 😂 Well, I guess that must have been Minah's thoughts too, hence the breakup. Hehe.

It wasn't a dream... Emerald took her memories of him so she had to fall asleep so it could work or else she would always be haunted! Thanks so much for reading.
!LUV

Ah yes! That makes sense! I didn't catch it on first reading. Nicely done!

Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh! This is brilliant! The end and everything...oh God! Are you a script writer? This is so good!! I feel sad though but not all love stories have a happy ending!

Agreed. Happy endings in stories are overrated in my opinion. A little sourness in the sweet makes it believable, I think. 😄
Thanks for your visit. !PIZZA

Interesting story. The way it unfolds appeals and makes me think there was an inspiration from Lovecraft's monsters. If not, just great what you were able to imagine.

Hi @ricardo993. I'm happy you find this story interesting. Lovecraft's monsters? I take it that's a game or a movie? Hehe. I'll have to check it out then! 😄 Thanks for your visit.

Edit: I just googled it! It's a book and Neil Gaiman is one of the authors. Thanks for the recommendation. I'll search for an eCopy! 😄

Absolutely amazing story just the memories it brings to mind almost just immediately...
Wishing out loud.

Very good story. Thanks for sharing.

Reading this makes me wanna fall in love again. I wonder how it feels to be loved by some "different" being.

😄 I agree falling in love is a beautiful thing!

I wonder how it feels to be loved by some "different" being.

Now that would be something scary! Hehe. Thanks for your visit. !PIZZA 🙂

Hopefully they either had a second chance, or found their true soulmates after they healed!

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gahhhhh I didn't get this tag!!!!! hahahahaha

now let me read lol

This is a fantasy story, and a love story. Like the best fantasies, it carries a universal message. Can we overcome our bias? Can we rise above what we expect of ourselves and become greater? Can we stand the test of love? Your description of this extraordinary hybrid person, Emerald, is wonderful. We sympathize with Minah. How would we react? This hybrid person, after all, is not just a romantic interest, but would be Minah's mate, with all that implies.

Minah forgets, but her mind cannot be wiped entirely. There is a kind of echo that remains. We (those optimists among your readers) hope that maybe Minah and Emeral can 'meet' again, and fall in love again. Perhaps the second time Minah will have the courage to love.

A great story. Thank you for sharing.

Hello, The Inkwell. Thanks so much for reading and your comment.

Indeed these are valid questions that touch on the fabric of every relationship. If we can overcome our bias totally, I know the world would be better for it. This is the difficulty Minah had —understanding and accepting Emerald for who is. If this couple gets a second chance at love, I can only hope they make it work! 😄


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It's beautiful and and at the same time sad...to actually get such a revealing and still not be strong enough to bear it...it could have been a dream but it'll surely live with her forever... those set of jade-green beautiful eyes would be hard to erase from her memory..

Great story...I enjoyed every bit of it ❤️

...those set of jade-green beautiful eyes would be hard to erase from her memory..

Well said! If the story had continued, maybe the memory would have found its way back to her consciousness. I'm happy you enjoyed this story. Thanks, @chincoculbert. 🙂 !LUV

It'll be surely great to read a continuation... clearly it'll take a lot to get them off her mind...thanks for sharing this great story ❤️

Oh Kemmy why are you trying to conjure emotions in me this morning? I felt the pain and void along with Minah. Only, the void still feels like something was there but she cannot place. I want Emerald and Minah to be together again😭😭😭
Is it too much to ask?

As unearthly as it is, she’s deserving.

You wrote this so personally. You work always has a way with me.

Well done.

I want Emerald and Minah to be together again

😂 Me too! I agree Minah is deserving but she must to be ready and brave enough. Thanks for this lovely comment and for reading. !PIMP 🙂


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Fabulously done. In my estimation, he erased the memory so that she could live without him?
Imaginative, unusual and brilliant. ❤️🤗💕

In my estimation, he erased the memory so that she could live without him?

You are correct. I mean, who will stay sane after seeing something or someone unusual like Emerald? 😄

Thanks so much for reading. !LUV

Your story is amazing.
Minah was human after all and he wasn't.
Maybe they'll get back together?
True love hurts the most.

Thanks a lot! Yes, I wish Minah and her hybrid lover would get back together and hopefully make their love work.
!PIZZA 🙂

hehehehe I'm so glad I came looking for it cuz I was waiting for it! lolol so sorry I missed the tag!!!

and beautifully done!!!! his sacrifice of love for her was torture....but perfect!!!!

LOVED it

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Captured my imagination from the very first line till the end. A love story that resonates with human differences. This time it's a fantasy hybrid human, next one might be ethnic differences, or religious, or philosophical differences. But it begs the question of how we can elevate beyond our petty beliefs to accommodate others' differences.

I can't help but feel sorry for Minah, but perhaps it's what's best for her.

A beautiful story, perfectly crafted. One day you might have to lend me your pen. Lol

Indeed this story is about our differences and acceptance in spite of them!

Lend you my pen? 😄 You won't need it because you are a fine writer! Thanks for reading and for your charming comment. !LUV

Awwwn.. Thanks for the luv and the compliment

Lovely story filled with many lessons.

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