Surprise gift - Creative Nonfiction in The Ink Well: Prompt #18

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It was a cold morning on the second Sunday of May. I woke up to a tender hug my husband gave me, brushing his lips with mine, followed by my cheek he whispered in my ear: "happy mother's day" with a smile I told him "thank you my love".

Looking at my face, he got out of bed, he said "today is your day, so I'll take care of the kitchen", I replied "that's ok my love, so I can spend more time with Alexa and Ruth, however, deep down I was expecting a gift". We had breakfast, I cleared the table, I started to do the dishes to see if he would surprise me, nothing happened.

It was almost noon, we had to make lunch, I went to the kitchen to visualize what additives or condiments were missing for the meal. I noticed that we were missing some vegetables to spice up the meal. I went to the bedroom, put on a pair of pants, a flannel and some sandals; I went into the girls' room, took them by the hand and went with them to the bathroom to brush their teeth and give them a shower, I put a dress on each of them with their respective sandals.

I said to my husband: 'my love, I'm going to the store to buy dressing for the food',
He replied, 'okay, please don't be too long'.
With a kiss on the lips we said goodbye. On the way to the store I was thinking, "I'm sure when I get there I'll find my present on the dining room table or on my bed".
I got to the store, bought some vegetables, some treats for Alexa and Ruth. On the way back with the girls, I was very excited and intrigued, just thinking about what my gift would be.

When I got home with the groceries, I said out loud to my husband, "my love, I'm home", Alexa and Ruth ran out to give my husband a kiss and a hug. Very excited I placed the bags on the dining room table, to see if my gift was already there, intrigued but with sanity I approached the sink, I gave him a kiss. The man didn't say anything to me, exhausting my thinking resources I went to my room and didn't see anything unusual either.

For a moment I felt sad. On every special occasion he would give me a gift, at that moment there was no gift for me, instead, I reflected, I felt a little selfish because we don't always get what we want, I dedicated myself to enjoy my day and the things my husband was doing for me.

When it was 4 o'clock in the afternoon, he made popcorn, we went to the living room with the girls, we started to watch a movie Harry Potter and the philosopher's stone, when the movie was in the middle, he got up, I didn't pay attention to him because when the moment came when Harry Potter realizes the power that the stone had, the movie got very interesting, suddenly I felt that he put something next to me, but I was focused on what I was watching, when the ads came on, I turned to see, I shouted excitedly "oh my god my God! the movie got very interesting, suddenly I felt that he put something next to me, but I was concentrated in what I was watching, when the ads came, I turned to see, I shouted excited "oh my god, this is beautiful, my love, thank you for the gift, I love you, you are the sun that illuminates my days

While I was delighted looking at my wooden box. So many compartments to keep my most precious jewelry, the precious flowers he painted in relief on the lid, it was a tender and at the same time passionate gift.

He replied, "If I told you, it would no longer be a surprise, I noticed how you looked in the kitchen and in the bedroom, looking for your gift. I spent a month doing it, you didn't see it because I had it hidden under the bed. When you went to work and the girls were at school I started to make it.

Ten years ago my husband gave me that surprise gift, I still have the wooden box where I keep my rings, bracelets, necklaces and earrings.

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A beautiful story. What a nice gift your husband gave you, with his gentle hands. That has a great value.
I loved your story.
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@lrscarmen You were pleased to see your wooden box. So many boxes to keep the precious ornaments. Precious flowers painted on the lid, it certainly was a sentimental gift. Glad to read your heartfelt words. Thanks for sharing your memoir with us.

@fantom22, yes it was a wonderful gift.

What a wonderful gift he gave you! And what a relief, too. I remember in the early days of being a mother, I was sometimes disappointed that my husband didn't make much of Mother's Day. Finally, I told him that it is a very important day to me. Even more important than my birthday. I explained: Everyone has a birthday, and it's not something that you have achieved. It is something that happened to you. But being the mother of these three beautiful, healthy children is something that belongs to me alone. It is my life's greatest achievement." He has never overlooked Mother's Day again!

@jayna, it really was beautiful.

Oh my, your husband does know how to get to your heart! The anticipation of whether he had a gift for you or not was intense. And that's when the surprise came in. This is lovely.

Your story is a reminder that sometimes the greatest gifts are the ones that are made with love and care. Thanks for sharing your story. 💕 !LADY

@kemmyb, it really was made with a lot of love.

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I figured he got the gift at the end. What kept the story in suspense was those anxieties of knowing what it would be and how he would get it. Very good way of telling the everyday of a special day.

It was a day of anguish.

Congratulations, @lrscarmen! Your story has been chosen as one of the best of the week and is part of the highlighted author magazine #93.
https://peakd.com/hive-170798/@theinkwell/the-ink-well-highlights-magazine-93

Thank you @gracielaacevedo, it is an honor to be selected.

Such a lovely story. I like It when couples know how to treat their partners to such surprising moments.
But the feeling that comes with not getting what is expected from one spouse may be aligned to over-expectation.

That's why for a moment I felt discouraged.

This is such a lovely story, @lrscarmen. Perhaps he wanted to build up the anticipation for your gift that year. Fortunately in the end, you were not disappointed!

Thank you for sharing your story in The Ink Well, and for reading and commenting on the work of other community members.

One small note: there are a couple of edits you might want to make.

This paragraph is repeated:

For a moment I felt sad. On every special occasion he would give me a gift, at that moment there was no gift for me, instead, I reflected, I felt a little selfish because we don't always get what we want, I dedicated myself to enjoy my day and the things my husband was doing for me.

And this phrase is repeated:

the moment that Harry Potter realizes the power that the stone had, the movie got very interesting

Theinkwell, thanks for the correction. I fixed the text.