That's a bit crude, but the art is promising.
Maybe straighten out the HIVE text and increase the contrast every further, especially for the starts. The dark should also be pitch black without gamma.
Yeah this one particularly didn't goes well but I've lost the original file.. (didn't save it) and this one was a variation of a PNG and not the original PSD
I see, had a feeling that you might want some feedback because this one feels really epic at first sight but falls apart on second sight. There's something about art and emotions that makes connections or not.