Week 14. Song:Sam Feldt's MI Amor (Cover)

oluwavictory in #hive-140169 • 4 months ago

Hello guys, here's my entry for week 14.
I did a Cover of Sam Feldt's song Mi Amor. Listen to my composed Verse and tell me what think.

Lyrics

Verse 1
Maybe I'm naive
To think my future's somewhere in gommora
Maybe I'm naive for ya (Yeah)
Maybe I sound dumb
To say that you could be the one for me, like
Maybe I'm naive for ya (Yeah)

You got me going like, "Oh, oh, oh"
Got me singing like, "Ya, ya, ya"
Yeah, I was feelin' real low
Till I found you

Chorus:
'Cause I've been looking for mi a— mi a— mi a— mi amor
Yeah, I've been looking for mi a— mi a— mi a— mi amor
{Yeah, I've been looking for someone to love for the rest of my life
Yeah, I've been looking for mi a— mi a— mi a— mi amor
I've been looking for}

Verse 2(Self composed):

The one who's gonna end my pain, and my shame, all without no pay uh!
He'll take all of my sorrows away
Love with no conditions give me a brand new life
I found him, in his arms I know I'm safe
And now on, he will forever be my Amour
'Cause he's always been a friend and more

Pre-Chorus
You got me going like, "Oh, oh, oh"
Got me singing like, "Ya, ya, ya"
Yeah, I was feelin' real low
Till I found you

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4 months ago in #hive-140169 by oluwavictory

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jessicaossom 4 months ago

This is Sam FeIdt's new released song and it's also one of the trending songs on Vibes alongside Post Malone.

All week long, the part Mi-a Mi-a Mi-a Mi-a mor
I love that part, really good music.
Well done.

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verbal-d 4 months ago

@oluwavictory

This was a pretty solid entry
You had some creative changes into your own rendition cover
Of Mi Amor and I appreciate the effort and energy you put in
The second line was a bit questionable though
Why would you say that you are naive and hope that your
Future is somewhere in Gomorrah?
That's one of the two cities God burned down with fire and brimstone
Because of how wicked and evil they were
I found that quite interesting that you would sing that
It makes me ponder your second verse even more, who are you speaking about? Is it God?
Anyway, that was overall a solid performance, some parts seemed to be a bit too high for your vocal range but you gave it a good try
You can only get better with practice. Keep creating, sharing and having fun

-@Verbal-D: Gospel Musician/Rapper/Singer/Songwriter & Official Vibes Judge

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oluwavictory 3 months ago

Thank you @verbal-d for the candid observation.
The line being referred to, says: "maybe I'm naive to think my future is somewhere in Gomorrah"
Meaning I could think my future was in Gomorrah, (a place for destruction) because I was naive/ignorant.

Point taken, I will do well to work better on my high notes and communicate better with my lyrics.

Thank you.

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