do you remember when we first met

in #hive-1614652 years ago

do you remember when we first met?

hot vodka searing
and your hands slicing cabbage
seeing the dawn, drunk with love
weaving up t'hill and you laughing
reaching out your warm hands

that held me fast in church
where people had been binding hands
for hundreds of years

luna de miele
honey hands and late mornings
fresh peaches and red wine
hot springs at Saturnia

still you bring me coffee
hands coddling hot cups
coaxing us into the day's routine
we (mostly) shower together

i still kiss your palms
you still kiss my forehead

in the emergency room you text
my hand's okay, babe
i joke the relief: there's work to be done
i want to kiss you

like on that hillside
twenty years ago

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This is in response to Blockchain poets prompt of the week, Deepest Romantic Desires. There ain't no way I'm writing a classy romancey lovey dovey love poem - unless it has zombies in it. But my man's sitting in hospital with blood poisoning this morning and I'm at work as we text back and forth. It started in his thumb and a red line is travelling up his arm. When I think of my romantic desires, I guess I think of them now as the more mundane expressions of love rather than the big expressions based on idealism. I don't idolise my husband nor feel the need for grand gestures after twenty years of being in love and loving each other deeply. The grand things about our love are more gentle and profoundly caring - the softness of sleepy morning hugs, the cuppa he brings me every morning, the chatting in the shower about our day to come, the making of his favourite dinner because he's had a bad day, the travel book I surpise him with for his birthday because I knew he wanted it, the sky blue bicycle he restores for me with the cute basket at the front. Even after all this time, all I desire is him. I don't need rose bouquets.

We did, however, have quite the meeting story, the details of which I won't bore you with. But I remember me pouring vodka and him making bangers and mash for dinner - and I do recall thinking how beautiful his hands were. I remember falling in love with each other at first sight, something that we still feel in awe over many years of marriage later. We got married within a year - something I swore I'd never do. And here we are, and he is more than enough.

With Love,

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Please no vodka, I cannot stand it :D

Ha I honestly can't recall the last time I drank it, aside from homemade herbal tinctures!

Homemade ones are always different ... and allow for exceptions ;)

A simple yet beautiful poem. Love it!

Never heard of the contest nor the community before though, looks like I'll have to check the prompt out.

I must warn you though, I can be an extremely classy romancey lovey dovey love poet at times :)

But my man's sitting in hospital with blood poisoning this morning and I'm at work as we text back and forth.

I'm sorry about that. Hope he gets better soon. Although, now I see where the inspiration cane from.

He's fine! If I'm to stretch to a love poem it has to be a little like this and not gushy wushy ahaha.. that's the kind of stuff I scroll on by as it seems really shallow to me 🤪 but if you did write something lovey dovey I'll try to read it 😅❤️❤️❤️❤️

Lovey dovey love poems are overrated. The more understated appreciation of having each other is much more romantic.

Good poem!
I hope he is recovering from the blood poisoning.

Oh yes he's fine - knocked about by the antibiotics a bit combined with man flu but the redness has gone. I'll put him to work today 😅

Oh geez, I hope he will be ok! Not cool, blood poisoning. :((

He's fine. He's meant to be resting - but he so far has rebuilt a bike, tidied up the leave under the gazebo, chopped some wood and is now round a mate's doing landrover stuff. Sigh.

Sigh, mine was the same....

As you felt then, you still feel strongly now. Love is powerful and sweet. You carved out those words beautifully. I felt my heart beat tumultuously to your words. Deep desires, ever green feelings.

Romance is so much the sum of everything that inspires and attracts us to another human being. Yes, after time, love is just something you know is there. Lovely poem, and I hope your love gets better quickly 🤗

He's doing fine - we are having a wine and enjoying mushroom risotto!

He's fine, just a bit meh after antibiotics...

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