Deseos (Poema) Wishes (Poem)

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Con este poema estoy participando en el #ClubDePoesia del 19 de agosto, tomando como referencia el verso de Federico Garcia Lorca del poema Gacelas:

Quiero que la noche se quede sin ojos
y mi corazón sin la flor del oro.

Deseos

No quiero tenerte en lo inasible
en la voz que no te describe,
voz que besa el viento,
lleva el susurro de las dudas,
palabras que se desprenden
del árbol que nos cobija.

Yacen las miradas
como enemigos que se miran,
¿dónde estás corazón
desecho por la intriga?
no quiero esa luz que me fustiga,
prefiero el silencio
y la noche que cobija,
sin ojos que miren.

No quiero el dolor de tu partida,
quiero tus brazos como prisión repentina,
tus golpes al corazón
dónde recrece la vida,
quiero la luz de tus ojos
para romper la noche,
cuando la pasión domina.

With this poem I am participating in the #ClubDePoesia on 19 August, taking as a reference Federico Garcia Lorca's line from the poem Gacelas:

I want the night to be without eyes
and my heart without the flower of gold
.

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Wishes

I don't want to have you in the ungraspable
in the voice that doesn't describe you,
voice that kisses the wind,
carries the whisper of doubts,
words that fall off
from the tree that shelters us.

The gazes lie
like enemies that look at each other,
where are you heart
wasted by intrigue?
I don't want that light that whips me,
I prefer silence
and the night that shelters,
without eyes that look.

I don't want the pain of your departure,
I want your arms as a sudden prison,
your blows to the heart
where life recreates,
I want the light of your eyes
to break the night,
when passion dominates.


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Looks like a romantic one, yet mixture of sadness.

Is that just a poem or a reflection of your own life journey?

There's always a bit of life when I write poetry, thanks for reading.


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Wow what a fantastic poem about the longing for a loved one @silher, thanks a lot for sharing and stay awesome.



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