Ariadne's Tread part 3(final) || Scholars & Scribes and DreemPort collab

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This is part 3 of 'Ariadne's Tread.
Here you can read first and second part:

Ariadne's Thread part 1
Ariadne's Thread part 2

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His heart was beating so hard that he could almost hear it pounding in his ears. His limbs wriggled in rhythmic strides. Every movement startled him and every movement caused him great pain. The thread that had been his escape had become his curse. He felt the thin strand wrap tightly around his arms, tighten around his knuckles, wound the delicate skin of his neck.

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In the darkness he began to see silhouettes in the distance. He didn't know what he was looking at. Everything was still very blurry. He had already stopped believing his senses some time ago. He was suddenly blinded by a beam of light falling on his head. The light was bright and very warm. He pressed his eyelids together, but not for long. Curiosity was stronger than the pain.


The pillar of light was directed centrally at him. He felt the ground beneath his feet again. His arms and legs were now free. Shredded scraps of red thread lay at his feet. He eyed his body carefully - there were no signs of early injuries. There was no dried blood in the creases of his body, no bruises or scabs.
His body was clean and smooth.

But there were thread marks, like old scars.

They cut through his wrists and forearms. He touched his neck – he felt long convex scar under the fingertips. He looked at his ankles, saw long healed, though very deep wounds. He touched his face and after that - examined his hands closely.

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He began to turn slowly around his axis. He jumped up, did a pirouette in the air. When he landed gracefully on the ground a sobering sensation came over him....

He didn't understand what was happening to him. He began to gently rotate his wrists, raised his hands above his head, tilted his head back and began to tiptoe, faster and faster. His body took over.

He danced under the warm light of the lantern. His body moved without his participation. Was completely lost in movement of his body.


He looked around - his performance was no longer private. An audience grew up around him. The spectators stretched into infinity, multiplied like in a kaleidoscope. Growing fractals of viewers whispered among themselves covering their mouths. They pointed their fingers at him commenting loudly. He didn't care. Closed his eyes. His movements throbbed with emotion.


It seemed to him that he was beginning to hear music from afar. First the dragged notes of the strings, then the dramatic sounds of the piano. The music reminded him of nothing he knew. The melody was new, fresh.

He imagined himself holding the neck and bow, imagined himself sitting down at the piano and flicking the keys with his fingertips. Out of the corner of his eye he saw a slender figure sitting next to him at the piano. He wrote down the keys in his notebook. He wrote quickly because he was afraid that the ideas would dissolve into silence.

The dream disappeared in the soft light of the lantern.

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He danced on. People began to rise from their seats and clap. The ovation began to drown out the music in his head. They were so loud that he stopped hearing his own thoughts. He began to stumble over his own feet. His harmonious movements lost their lightness. His arms began to feel heavy and his motions very clumsy. He felt like his body was made of wood. His joints began to creak and every step became more and more difficult.

-Not yet! I still have so much to do!' - He shouted.

He made one last attempt and jumped up to do another pirouette - and froze in stillness.

The ovation grew louder, more insistent. The audience left their seats to look at the performer. They started to climb on the stage, stepping on each other's hands, squeezing to be the first to reach greatness. Absorbed by his beauty, they began to touch him.

His body was as smooth as glass. Cold as stone.

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I hope you all have a lovely day,
Yours,
Strega Azure

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Here you will find my reference picture by wonderful artist Olivier Valsecchi that I am currently obsessed about. Here you can find more of his works (mind you, they are mostly nudes!):

profile of Olivier Valsecchi on Echo Fine Arts
Olivier Valsecchi' Instagram

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I have used 200mg black paper and white watercolour pencil.

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Great ending! He made a wonderful performance before becoming still and frozen. I love the bold part of not yet! I still have so much to do! We're hardly done with the things we are doing when it is time to leave. Sometimes, we're just beginning to grasp it :)

So happy you liked it!

Life is short and it is really easy to lose our path. He at least had great crescendo :)

Very true! It was indeed great and memorable to the audience :)

Very cool, its a great background went so well with the story

Thank you very much!
It is new for me working with negative(white on black), but I actually enjoy this new way of drawing:)

What motivated you to try out this new kind of drawing

Actually, the story makes me do so.

I've written the second part - and a good deal of the story was set up in complete darkness. 3rd part was happening in darkness mostly and then - this one beam of light. So I thought black background would fit way better. Plus I wanted to do something more dramatic.
And to be fair - learn something new:)

Ohhh i see its always good to try out new innovations and explore, at least you've learnt one or two from this

Yep, that's exactly that! Thank you:)

Thank you for thanking me, ☺️☺️

I think I've used all the words I know to shower your art with praise, so I'm just gonna say that this is incredible, like all your creative output. Keep mesmerising us with such things, please.

You did, you were more than generous with your praises.
Really appreciate, and cannot thank you enough @holoz0r!

Wow so much life and details,amazing and well done.

Thank you very much! I was thinking it is nit detailed enough to be fair :D I ma glad you liked it @sam9999!

So, what happened? Was he frozen in place forever. Was that his end? What an interesting and befitting end. I will always be in awe of how you describe things. It's more like your art roo, rich with detail and mesmerizing to the viewer. So lovely Strega. I !luv it.🤗🌺

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He froze in time like we all do when we die.
But his end was little bit more poetic than usually is:)

Yeah, a poetic ending makes it far more beautiful. A really enjoyable post dear.

Thank you very much!

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I love your usage of poetic lines. He froze. An end befitting a star. S bittersweet one. And I had fun reading every word. My head was moving so did my body to follow the flow and it was super.

Thank you very much @balikis!

My love of dance and dancers cut itself here, I couldn't stop it. While I was writing, I was moving my hands like my main character, it's really not easy to describe the movements in order to make them understandable for the reader.

But you did awesome with it. I had fun reading. Well done !LADY

Thank you very much!

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Working on it! Thank you very much!

This image tells the intensity of his performance, it's incredible. This is a well detailed description of the whole atmosphere. I couldn't help but take a long stare at the image.

Thank you very much! I am working on my white pencil skills lately. It is new medium for me and it will take some time to get to the level I will be happy about. But it is cool experiment, not gonna lie:)

so after readimg other commemts here (amd yes... sorry you cam see the my letter m is replacimg the correct letter hahah) but I saw somethimg totally differemt here.. hahaha

you kmow what I thought he was im the emd??? a mariomette takem out of a box amd beimg pulled by a master puppeteer! hahahahaha

i guess that's what art is all about - we cam all see differemt thimgs

amd this drawimg... specTACular!!!!!!!!!!!!!! so so so much emotiom im this!!!!!!!!!! ITS GORGEOUS!

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I actually welcome all sort of interpretations with open hands, really. I definitely want to encourage people to do so. It is very important to me that the reader does not feel led by the hand like a small child from beginning to end. I rely on someone else's sensitivity and emotional intelligence.

I hope that there is something in it for everyone:)

I want open ones heads wide! (no surgically, just to clarify!) 😂

AMAZING work!
Do you enjoy the White on black? Will you do more?
it makes one think, almost backwards, compared to doing blacks and greys on white, right? Makes your mind move differently, for this

Black and grey on white, is like ADDING.
but the white on black is like the images are there, behind the black page, and one needs to apply the white to uncover it!

You are right on point here!

I will make no secret of the fact that drawing this way is much more difficult to me. And not just because I have to think in terms of lights, and not shadows and half-shadows - but because the white watercolour pencil I use is almost impossible to erase from black paper without leaving a mark.

So not only I can not make an initial overall sketch - as I do when working in pencil - but also every movement has to be more considered - because it will going to stay there:)

Plus it's very easy to 'overwork' the drawing, working with white on black - less is more, definitely.
I am a fan of 'layering' and restraint in the use of media is not my strong suit, really.

Nevertheless - I will keep practising, I think the 'Sleeping Kingdom' series will be perfect for this:)

I believe my daughter uses a medium grey charcoal pencil for the initial sketch, which is a bit easier to hide/cover, in the final piece, than white

Yeah, I did so with pervious drawing, but it made the white pencil a bit grey:( But! I've learned a lot, hope the next one will not take me as much time as this one:)

This triptych is stunning! Having read the trilogy I feel like he has given his all. His entire life has been dedicated to his art, his passion... and in those moments before he succumbs to death, he has the opportunity for a final encore - one last emotional experience wrapped up in the dance of his life, and expressed exquisitely in these negatives. He gets to remember and be remembered for the passion that drove him and the excellence he achieved. He fights desperately for his creativity til the end... but the beauty and mystique of a foreign melody is a gentle reminder that his time has come. !LUV !ALIVE

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So you are reading my mind? Nice job, really! Where they teach that??

I think it's very important to find meaning not only in the sufferings and joys, but to observe closely and learn from what life brings. When you are faced with manipulation, a force beyond yourself with which it is difficult to fight - it is even more important - learning from such an experience.

And to do what you love, at all costs:)

Where they teach that??

Erm... would you believe... from somewhere within - and yes I agree - always find the lesson in every experience - and choose joy! !LUV

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I would really like to implement that:)

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I am still trying to grasp the whole idea behind who the character is because I had to go back to read all the parts in order to understand the identity of the character or his name, it doesn't look like he has one.

apart from the darkness he dwelled in and everyone not noticing him, it seems the story it self had forgotten his existence.

It felt like a mirror world, similar to the idea of hunger games or resident evil where individuals are kept captive and manipulated into believing their actions is a result of their will without knowing they are just an amusement rodents.

I must ask, is the character human? the story made mention multiple times about the inability of the character to control his own body, especially in the ending when you mentioned that he froze, i guess i was expecting more human like term like "he fainted", it feels like a feature of a robot, or is it as a result of the pain or confusion that roam in his thought

It seems he is the only one that is not conscious of his surroundings or what was going on, I got confused a little about the fact that the Spectators and audience mentioned in the story, are they some kind of hallucinations created by the character or are the real?

the whole idea of the story still feels like a nightmare to me, regardless of it being a fictional character, I felt pity for him, no one should be left to roam around in darkness and absent of sight for that long.

Your drawings have always captivated my attention and the terms used in describing the situation surrounding the character is amazing.

Thanks for sharing

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So, instead of using flesh and blood characters, I have used symbols.

A representation of a human being - a lost character suspended between dream and reality. I wanted to show his strengths - as when he followed the thread with determination; but also his weaknesses - when he succumbed to manipulation and all he wanted was death.

The representation of the man at the end is frozen in stillness - like a statue, a sculpture - it is a symbol of the time that has stopped for us, but everyone around us (the observers) - lives on and can admire our legacy (he - as a beautiful sculpture, but it can be the poetry we left behind, the photos, and even the children who will please the eyes of others when ours closes forever).

I used thread as a symbol of hope and the path - as in the myth of Theseus ('ardiadne thread') but also as a symbol of marionette strings - when we are consciously or unconsciously subjected to manipulation.

You can definitely call this story a nightmare dream - the exaggeration here was not accidental - I wanted to emphasise how easy it is to fall from euphoria to depression, how our point of view changes when circumstances beyond our control turn everything upside down.

Life is complicated, but it can also be wonderful.

Even the greatest suffering can turn into something beautiful.

This is the beauty of application of literary technique and terms to creative writing. Though I was unable to comprehend the meaning of the characters' existence but with your explanation it all became clearer.

Thanks for taking your time to give a descriptive explanation and analysis of the character/story it is highly appreciated.

I really appreciate that you just simply asked. Plus I find your interpretation very much interesting too!

See you around!