Hello, wow my friend, a very disturbing and creative story ideal for Halloween, I never believed that a school friend could become so evil and less that the origin of this tradition was in the very town of Salen, great imagination no doubt you have a lot of talent, may God watch over you and let you develop to the fullest all your abilities, I'm sure you will soon become a great writer you just need perseverance, effort and study hard. Best regards.