A good story, @amarachi22! Good scene descriptions. For future writing projects you might want to note that 'faithful day' is probably not the term you are going for. It seems 'fateful' would be more appropriate here. Also, you have a strong resolution. The character reforms. However, she does do this at the expense of the church-going Edmonds family. Readers are likely looking for some remorse about that, if the character is truly reformed.

Again--good writing.