Your story introduces us to a young boy who is eager to lose his innocence....he wants to grow up, fast. Fortunately, the loss of innocence does not lead to a tragic end, as we fear it might as we read. The adventures of his cousin and his cousin's friends are in themselves quite innocent.

We enjoyed reading this story, and remind you that we expect our writers to comment on two stories for each published here. Thank you for sharing *Cupcake's Ordeal" with us, @oluchi31.